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of the article, before the first heading. It is not a news-style lead or "lede" paragraph. The typical Wikipedia visit is a few minutes long (for all pages...

to the Good article criteria! A good short article or good lede consists of an English lede that is — Well-written: the prose is clear, concise, and understandable...

14:32, 7 July 2019 (UTC) Finds and improves the lede sections of articles across Wikipedia. The lede is arguably the most important part of the article;...

Double the lede! December 2021 Welcome! This December Women in Red proposes an editathon we’re calling "Double the lede!" Now that more and more people...

the discussion was: keep. ✗plicit 14:13, 17 January 2025 (UTC) Talk:Wiki/lede (edit | subject | history | links | watch | logs)​ Unused discussion page...

the lede would likely be "Catalan [profession]". As she has not only played for Spain, but as of 2025 has their record number of appearances, the lede would...

Uqaqtuq (talk), Sunasuttuq 23:27, 18 October 2015 (UTC) User:Sonja Brentjes/Lede (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs) Alternative version of Alhazen...

for over a year. The WP:CONSENSUS is that the lede is neutral, so a project dedicated to make the lede neutral is operating against consensus. As an aside...

help: Over 14,000 articles need their lede (or "lead") improving. More than 2,000 have no lede at all! The lede is the most-read part of any article....

Wikipedia Resources for Africa and Africans AfricaCROWD project description / lede [UNDER CONSTRUCTION] For the May 2015 event, please see archived event page...

Wikipedia Resources for Haiti and Haitians HaitiCROWD project description / lede [UNDER CONSTRUCTION] For the March 2015 event, please see archived event...

Lead improvements by Noyster Lead improvements by DiscantX (alt spelling "Lede") Please feel free to add yourself here, and to indicate any areas of particular...

01:24, 5 February 2014 (UTC) Response to comments from Bencherlite Done. Lede = changed to suggestion from Bencherlite, I like the new version, thank you...

the comments of those who favour retaining the current general form of the lede as it is in many the the comments of those who support a change. It is viewed...

an idea of what is required for a woman’s biography on Wikipedia. Is the lede written to convey why the person is unique and worthy of an encyclopedic...

other hand, Gilabrand twice removed substantial contextual info from the lede, misleadingly stating that the info was "unsourced" when it appears to simply...

This is your lede paragraph; it should summarize the most notable aspects of the subject's life. You can have additional paragraphs in the lede, if there...

two parties for each of you to write up your ideal lead below, since the lede seems to be the only point of dispute. Thanks! Hipocrite (talk) 19:26, 19...

January 2023 (UTC) Comments after a quick skim: The lede is five paragraphs, which according to WP:LEDE is longer than is recommended. I suggest trimming...

table, outside the lede) with a ref, we wouldn't need to footnote the mention in the lede, but it doesn't appear anywhere else but the lede. However, if the...

2008 (UTC) Remove - Fails Cr 1-3,+5, lead fails to FL compliance's and WP:LEDE compliance's. Tables need to be updated, small font needs to be removed,...

Subcategories section where the Category is a redlink. The Portal posts the lede of the article on Ant, some little snippets from articles on songs, a reproduction...

use of grandstanding text has been very common in the lede intro text of articles (see WP:LEDE), where mention of some lesser-known tangent topics and...

Outagamie County, Wisconsin - added almost all 45 images Rugby Colony, added new lede image and appx. two dozen other images Chee Kung Tong Society Building numerous...

the Lead often called the "lede"? Where does "lede" come from? --P123ct1 (talk) 09:27, 7 September 2014 (UTC) wiktionary:lede#Etymology 2. PrimeHunter (talk)...

blogs, or social media such as YouTube, Twitter, Facebook, or LinkedIn. The lede (i.e. the first couple of lines) should summarize text cited in the body...

03:34, 26 July 2013 (UTC) I like the lack of references in the lede stylistically; the lede ought to be a summary of the referenced material in the body...

this list features professional standards of writing in the lede, the lede is engaging, the lede and list are indeed comprehensive, and the structure and...

2009 (UTC) Opposed on jargon (in lede). If you expect a random reader to know what osteochondritis means in the lede, you're on the wrong site. The article...

December 2022 (UTC) Comments after a quick skim: The lede is quite short. Consider expanding it per MOS:LEDE There are a lot of one-paragraph sections, which...

does not have a proper lede. The lede should be a quick and simple overview of the body that follows. In this case, however, the lede is filled with numbers...

WP:SAL where it is recommended that stand-alone lists begin with a proper lede presenting a well-defined set of inclusion criteria. These criteria should...

those under more general headings  Done Second-pass comments: Lede: trialed => tried  Done Lede: Might be worth changing the first appearance of "the assailant"...

equivalent miles, but in the lede section of articles, hand-coded text is preferred to allow pop-up text from the lede to avoid showing "{{convert|....

the lede we can get an idea of the changes in the body. Due to significant levels of revert-warring and campaign-like efforts to alter the lede, this...

2011 (UTC) Comments - I'm not quite sure it's ready yet. A glance at the lede revealed a number of problems: I don't think 9 named storms for a season...

Pakistan-related articles, such as Indian articles, may be subsumed under WP:INDICSCRIPT. Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Arabic#Urdu Template:Indic script lede...

2007), WikiProject Lead section cleanup (November 2007) and WikiProject Lede Improvement Team (January 2015). With almost 600 pages missing a lead and...

length and article lede is very weak [2]. The "average" relationship is given by: length of lede = 1560+.016*length of article net of lede. Since the article...

massive POV source distortion in the lede[1], the sort of which should have been caught in the Good Article review. The lede implied that retail transactions...

comments after a quick skim: Expand the lede so that it is a summary of the article's information. See WP:LEDE for more details. Avoid one paragraph sections...

catching up to speed on the article. The lede is intended to summarize the contents, so by tracing the changes in the lede we can get an approximation of the...

does not accurately reflect anything, since the lede was updated without actually updating the lede to make sense. It just added the new article name...

the lede says there're two. When I scroll to the table it shows 1. Done Repared Similar discrepancies for compilations.  Done also repared In the lede "finnish"...

[1]. The contributor(s) have retired from Wikipedia An old 2009 FL with a lede wholly reliant on one primary source and is underdeveloped due to the information...

sentence in the lede, I'm pretty sure I follow what it means, but I'm not sure it's really as plain as it could be, especially for a lede section. I'd add...

no consensus. I'd recommend unlinking the red links and adding a proper lede. -- Y not? 16:30, 28 June 2013 (UTC) List of former members of AKB48 (edit |...

trouble with ideas on what to put in the lede to make it longer but without coming off as too repetitive. The lede was the main criticism in the comments...

April 2007 (UTC) Right off the bat, I can see several problems just in the lede. Calling Alicia the third cyclone is confusing, as cyclone generally refers...

Per WP:LEADCITE, all info in lede should be already cited to in-line cites, below later in article main body text, thus, lede intro sect itself should not...

is by treating the different parts of the article in separate ways. The lede is supposed to read as simply as possible. This means we need to keep away...

general reader, but don't have much knowledge of microwave electronics. The lede seems fairly technically sophisticated to me. It assumes folks already know...

up on. Lede "independent electronic dance music record label" - WP:SEAOFBLUE, could do with rewording/removing some links. The refs in the lede aren't...

why does this criticism even belong in the lede in the first place??? This unsubstantiated claim in the lede lacks verification, represents a POV shared...

The Rambling Man (talk) 18:28, 20 October 2013 (UTC) I've restored the lede to an earlier version. Tables and key have been fixed up. —Vensatry (Ping...

after 1952? Are the tracks still there? The lede could be expanded upon, as it is quite short. The lede should be a summary of the article's contents...

Virginian (talk) 20:08, 31 August 2015 (UTC) Lede Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Lead section, the lede of this article adequately defines the film, establishes...

suggestions as far as the MOS goes. The lede is very long, especially the second paragraph. Technically it is within MOS:LEDE as only four paragraphs, but I'd...

looks very good. In copyediting the lede, I made one substantive alteration, which merits discussion. While the lede stated that the Trinity Test took place...

instead of "sign" [unless "sine" means like sine, cosine, and tangent]), and lede (instead of lead). I know approximately what they mean, but what is the reason...

Prose You need to double the size of the lede. Is it a corporation or organization? Infobox is not the same as lede. It was founded in 2002, why hasn't there...

result is a choppy look and feel. Lede "From Ammianus Marcellinus (24.2.4)" - What does "(24.2.4)" refer to? The lede should be an inviting summary of...

The lede should be able to stand alone: it should be possible to read only the lede and come away with a reasonable overview of the subject. The lede should...

♪Tempo di Valse ♪ 14:28, 26 March 2009 (UTC) Delete first off, it should be "burying the lede." Second off, it's just the definition of a term. I've already merged it...

This article is a dumbed down version of Virus, having virtually the same lede. It is a violation of WP:NOTTEXTBOOK. We do not have Wikipedia articles called...

Per WP:LEADCITE, all info in lede should be already cited to in-line cites, below later in article main body text, thus, lede intro sect itself should not...

feel about a lede which combined aspects of Option C and Option D -- I mean, one which (like Option C) kept the phrase VnT in the lede, and which used...

the lede should summarize the article. If something is important enough to merit a section header, it should at least be mentioned in the lede. By the...

something I commented on before, is the quality of the lede. On the best articles on wikipedia, the lede is the most important part of the article, it should...

there is some information in the lede that does not seem to be in the article. WP:LEDE has more information on what a lede should look like. I hope this...

the talk page. In terms of improving the article, I suggest expanding the lede so that it is a summary of the article's content. Z1720 (talk) 15:39, 25...

largely of marketing buzzspeak. Almost unreferenced, with no references in the lede and no footnotes until three-fourths of the way through the article. Google...

Response to comments by Wehwalt Lede Done. Moved "satirical" to later section of lede, good point. Done. Removed this info from lede. Done. Removed all mention...

insults, or what have you :-P -RunningOnBrains 05:27, 13 March 2007 (UTC) Its lede needs to be a bit longer. An extra paragraph (or two, at most) would suffice...

overwhelm A-class with them.) Hawkeye7 (discuss) 23:06, 4 January 2023 (UTC) Lede; On the night of 16/17 August, mortars and recoilless rifles (RCL) attacked...

unlikely, (2) W3C finds no dead links, (3) the lede is concise, relevant, and compliant with WP:LEDE, (4) I did not locate any (uncorrected) spelling...

near the lede since it is spilling the WP:COATRACK there too. If corrected as per my suggestions above, a bare mention could be made in the lede that Indians...

split the lede up? MOS:LEDE has this as being 4 paragraphs max? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:40, 30 July 2020 (UTC) The lede goes into...

facts and you want the lede to basically give the reader a complete picture. So because the history is so important, the lede should tell you more about...

the article: The WP:LEDE is too short. The lede should summarise the information in the article; for an article this large, the lede should be about a paragraph...

8 November 2010 (UTC) Short comments by Chipmunkdavis Last sentence of lede seems fairly irrelevant to a list article. Perhaps move the last sentence...

meets WP:GNG, so, in my opinion, it falls under the part of the WP:NSPORT lede that says: the meeting of any of these criteria does not mean that an article...

on WP:VG. Here's a few main issues: Remove the references from the lede. The lede is a summary of the rest of the article. The information SHOULD be somewhere...

Expedition 26. are spaced weirdly Last sentence at the lede should be moved, it broke the lede coherence 1 or 2-sentences paragraphs should be merged...

history | links | watch | logs) Kind of a pointless portal. It's just the lede from Accounting and the lead from one other random related article. To see...

responses we get. Thanks, SilverserenC 05:53, 24 February 2012 (UTC) Comment - lede says: "During the 1990s, the company was the subject of controversy for discriminatory...

transmission lines in distributed element circuits are rare, yet in the lede picture there are two stick-insect networks with tapered bodies. These networks...

an article of this length, the lede should be a couple of paragraphs. A non-expert reader should be able to read the lede and get the gist of the whole...

any other facts, if they are not repeated in the main text. Lede You need to review the lede for compliance with WP:LEAD. Does it truly reflect the content...

[[WP:SYNTH, as language in lede makes clear.E.M.Gregory (talk) 16:19, 1 April 2016 (UTC) I'll take a look at rewriting the lede to kill POV and Synth. Unless...

lede cover only the most major points in a BLP is quite sufficient, and in line with newspaper practice. Recall that immediately following the lede is...

crafting this lede and list! -- West Virginian (talk) 04:40, 18 August 2015 (UTC) The first statement in the first sentence of the lede where the term...

a few changes while looking over this article. Lede Style - I think the second paragraph of the lede reads too much like a timeline. A lot of sentences...

citations, updates needed in the "Wind power density" section, a six-paragraph lede that needs to be reformatted, and perhaps updating some of the sources to...

comments are after a quick skim of the article: I am surprised at how short the lede is, and I think it can include more detail. "and opposed a referendum on...

from public life by Manuel in the interest of not having two of the three lede paragraphs start with "in [year]", perhaps Weakened by the onset of an illness...

Kahn 11:34, 27 August 2019 (UTC) Will update this with more as I have time. Lede and infobox Generally speaking the inbox information should be cited in the...

on the lede so if others want to jump in and take on the body of the text, please do! Lede: Citations don't belong in the lede. I think the lede is stiff...

other's positions on the dispute. A couple section headings, the content, the lede and an image are the main concerns of the parties. Dispute resolution noticeboard...

Regarding the lede, there were some sales statistics that weren't in the body of the text, which was why there were citations in the lede. I've now updated...

• 19:08, 6 July 2014 (UTC) The first sentence of the lede is almost promotional. It's not lede-relevant to list each and every city where the firm has...

delete. The sub-articles are a separate matter, but as pointed out, even the lede sources don't work here Black Kite (t) (c) 01:02, 25 December 2010 (UTC)...

13:05, 16 January 2021 (UTC) I would remove "company town" from the lede. In the lede I would place information found in the sentence from the "Design"...

(talk) 15:19, 29 July 2022 (UTC) No, as it is not a proper lede and any article needing a lede written that way to justify its existence is a sign that...

adopted logo...[1] The lede is supposed to be a summary of the key points in the main text (WP:LEDE). As such, the current lede is too skimpy. What is...

trim before someone will copyedit the work. Please read through WP:LEDE about the lede length, try summarizing the article, and merge shorter sections....

parentheses directly after the article title in the lede, or if there are already parentheses after the lede, insert the pronunciation as in this example: Marc...

no longer comprehensive. I am also concerned with the short length of the lede. Z1720 (talk) 23:47, 3 January 2023 (UTC) Move to FARC: this article was...

article's lede uses some jargon terms like "involements" and "consolation goal", and the rest of the article relies on the information from the lede, rather...

names, including historical names and spellings can be mentioned in the lede. Redirects (see Wikipedia:Redirect) should be created for these alternative...

investigating using GPT-4 for ChatGPT-assisted article reviews. After feeding the lede of this article for analysis (haven't figured out how to get it to read the...

responding to your other suggestion, lower in your above points, I added to the lede intro sect to summarize the 3 main sections of the article: Background; Inspiration...

(UTC) Lede Personally, I think the lede is a good length as it quickly summarizes what the article will be about. However, I feel like the lede seems...

use an image review. The lede/intro of the article fails WP:LEAD, it should not be more than 4 paragraphs in length; this lede is 6 paragraphs, and a bunch...

I'm not sure if I have a source for that. I was planning on leaving the lede to the very last, as I usually do when doing this kind of update. Ivanvector...

August 2021 (UTC) Non-expert review. I agree with Horsesizedduck that the lede is quite long. I would suggest trimming this a little bit. However, two cyclone...

Tiananmen Square protests of 1989? Go Phightins! 17:20, 8 June 2013 (UTC) The lede of the referenced TheNextWeb article says they "blocked the encrypted version"...

at least be mentioned in the lede. I see nothing about feeding, behavior, breeding, etc., in your lede. Similarly, the lede should include only the most...

and Siegfried Lederer from Auschwitz for examples). The lede needs to be edited to fit MOS:LEDE (no more than four paragraphs). Some of the sections are...

citations from the lede. See WP:GAMESPOT for more information on when it may be incorrect or unreliable. Dimps and NanaOn-sha as seen in the lede do not seem...

ambiguous." CR4ZE (t • c) 07:32, 4 May 2014 (UTC) The second paragraph of the lede is all plot but no gameplay. Try to reduce instances of "the game". "It"...

lede (opening/very first section of the article) is a summary of the key points in the main article text (WP:LEDE). The current single-sentence lede is...

son-of-a-bitch in the lede of John Neal (writer) (something I learned in the Featured Article nomination process). Typically, nothing in the lede should need a...

use email) for another set of eyes or whatever. FWIW, here is the original lede for this page: Welcome. This WikiProject is a group of editors working together...

(talk) 18:19, 1 July 2020 (UTC) Comments Could you find a higher-quality lede image? ~ HAL333 21:35, 2 July 2020 (UTC) Quick comment – References 3, 7...

West Virginian (talk) 04:20, 11 August 2015 (UTC) The first sentence of the lede should probably have an inline citation for the film's direction by Bhandarkar...

two most recent times I was told that the lede being unsourced was a problem. I have since sourced the lede with the same sources I use further down in...

made to this page.‎ The result was delete. Also, this article use to have a lede but it was removed as a copyvio. Ron Ritzman (talk) 01:16, 11 December 2011...

an alternate organization that will work. I have completely re-worked the lede to (I think) give a better overview of just what the scandal was, rather...

fight against oligarchs and the "russian aggression" stood right up in the lede section and failed to get corrected for over a month.) The results of this...

This is your lede paragraph; it should summarize the most notable aspects of the subject's life. You can have additional paragraphs in the lede, if there...

Wikipedia doesn't normally do so. You say the traditional lede is too short, but the current lede of Solar system is a lot shorter given the size of the...

November 2008 (UTC) Keep: Added citation to main data (previously in EL). Lede can be easily worked on --- please give this a few days, and we can make...

Thanks, Greg Heffley 00:03, 30 October 2011 (UTC) Lede: The lede is too short. Remember that a lede is to generate interest into the article and to summarise...

lost films). I agree that this list could done some work like updating the lede, add citation for accolades (who add this anyway, when there's already a...

Thanks, Psychotic Spartan 123 12:25, 21 April 2015 (UTC) Lede I really enjoyed your lede. It is very informative and representative of what your article...

have determined to remove the description of "propaganda film" from the LEDE. So far no one has challenged the references in Wikipedia:Reliable sources/Noticeboard...

article and unsourced statements. Lesser concerns are that the lede does not meet MOS:LEDE, and the overreliance on official sources for things like the...

2010 (UTC) Hi. In some articles, the lede includes footnotes, but other articles are written in a style where the lede does not have footnotes, and instead...

1 November 2016 (UTC) There's a fair amount that can be rephrased in the lede. This should be an introduction to the topic—the mice, their popularity,...

probably going to hate this, but the lede is too long now! For the length of the article, I recommend 2-3 paragraphs. WP:LEDE will give some guidance. Titles...

the lede we can get an idea of the changes in the body. Due to significant levels of revert-warring and campaign-like efforts to alter the lede, this...

weather there copy edit is neede Thanks, Comments after a quick skim: The lede could be expanded to cover more aspects of the article The article suffers...

paragraph, the inline citation belongs at the end of the paragraph. The lede should be an inviting summary of the whole article. My rule of thumb is to...

Timeline • User compare report Auto-generated every hour. Ducking. Same lede (Special:Diff/868900703 and Special:Diff/869910783), same wording in clarification...

(UTC) Thanks for hard work on the article! I think it's close to GA. The lede now has one sentence about climate change and ocean acidification, but the...

content-based organization) and are formatted in a sortable table. There is a lede section that is cited and accurately describes the list, there is a captioned...

sources where appropriate. You may also want to consider rephrasing the lede sentence. The dependent clause "the second most populous" does not seem to...

the lede and main body The infobox The career statistics table Section headings Image captions Tables Use Milan in: Subsequent mentions in the lede and...

well-written, comprehensive, well-researched, neutral, stable, and has a lede that adheres to Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Lead section. It also uses consistent...

used within the article's lede are future tense words such as "planned", "intended", or "proposed"... to be used in the lede to clarify that the article...

being: Footnotes, Note, and References. Lede intro sect is a bit imbalanced. Two-sentence-long-paragraph in lede for last paragraph is a bit short. This...

WP:LEDE the lede should ideally have no sources at all, since the lede should summarize material already in the body. Hence, some of the current lede should...

took it one step further. Jefferson's name still appeared four times in the lede so I condensed one of the passages in question as the associated details...

sentence or two in the lede, which more naturally combines with the sentence on materials. PL290, you complain that the lede is too detailed, but many...

main complaint is her work is often worn by high-profile celebrities in the lede. Even if that was cited, I feel it is inappropriate there. Thanks for your...

Perspective (talk) 12:51, 10 September 2011 (UTC) Comments from Jappalang Lede "William Smith Clark (July 31, 1826 – March 9, 1886) was a professor of chemistry...

link [1]) Talk:War of the Pacific#RfC: Which are the relevant facts for the LEDE regarding the 14 February 1879? - A failed Request for Comment (Permanent...

in the lede, but if sources for the lede aren't cited, wouldn't that be plagiarism due to lack of attribution? Say someone moves a bunch of lede info into...

Z1720, for taking the time. Edwininlondon (talk) 21:24, 8 April 2021 (UTC) Lede The first sentence is a run-on sentence. This should be split. Done "having...

(talk) 11:35, 22 December 2016 (UTC) Support – I made a minor edit to the lede just now, but otherwise, the list looks nice! TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk ·...

remove the citation from the lede. The lede is supposed to be a summary of content in the body, so anything in the lede that would need to be cited should...

Archaic style You seem to be asking for everything to be put into the lede. The lede is meant to be a summary of the article and I cannot see that "Greek...

at White privilege started with insertion of mitigating language into the lede paragraph ([1], [2], [3], others). On Nov 22, after some discussion regarding...

mostly Red links. Tresiden (talk) 17:11, 14 November 2009 (UTC) I've added a lede and deem it now worth keeping. DS (talk) 17:24, 14 November 2009 (UTC) Relisted...

It looks generally good, overall. I think the prose in the lede could use some work. Lede "It is based on the stories by Robert E. Howard, a pulp fiction...

but calling it the logical consequence and the can of worms opened by the lede saying "reliable sources" alone. The section needs an outside admin to just...

paragraph(s) of multi section articles, where it may be expanded per WP:LEDE in the article body, and to be used without further expansion in stub or...

for a top 10 for the United States proper. The table isn't the same as the lede, meaning it doesn't have to summarize everything in the article. ♫ Hurricanehink...

Support FrB.TG, GagaNutella, and SNUGGUMS, the prose of the lede is well-written, the lede adequately meets the criteria at Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Lead...

many references at the end, but needs in-line citations. Provide a proper lede sentence as to the subject and scope of this page. Use proper WP:Markup for...

queries". Pick one and stick to it. The lede is much too short for an article this long. Check WP:LEAD. Your lede ought to summarize all the important information...

that were used in the article as references. The lede/intro sect is a bit small, per WP:LEAD, lede/intro sect should adequately summarize the entire...

Structure of the article Infobox Lede Characteristics Physical Allotropy Isotopes Occurrence Geological Biological History Production Chemistry and compounds...

title and in the article. Ensure the Czech name is clearly stated in the lede after the first use of the title e.g. using {{langx|cs|Czech Name}}. Otherwise...

the first sentence of the lede. 22 January 2024 - Edit by STP43FAN to remove the term "right-wing" in first sentence of lede in the aforementioned article...

October 2011 (UTC) Comments: Not much to pick at, but I did find a few things: LEDE: In "Love Always peaked at number five on the Billboard 200,[2] and number...

well enough. I won't comment on that as I have no insight. However, the lede identifying his accomplishment in the field of music needs deleted entirely...

— Hunter Kahn 05:46, 29 November 2010 (UTC) Oppose for three reasons The lede, at just over 100 words and only a single paragraph, is woefully short. The...

Steal This Movie. The lede says it all. Article leads give a concise description of who the person is and why he is notable. The lede for this article is...

the lede a little. Please have a look. Regards, --Khadar Khani (talk) 00:37, 30 September 2014 (UTC) Support. Great list, especially after the lede was...

also have a remark concerning the two citations in the lede. The use of citations in the lede is discouraged by the MOS unless they pertain to a controversial...

the lede, it is never possible for a lede to cover every item on a list, otherwise there would be no purpose in having the actual list. The lede is a...

current technical name of the article that should be considered in the WP:LEDE and wherever it concerns. ("No other common name exists" see Talk:Treaty...

controversial? Who made the controversial attempts? It might perhaps be a stronger lede to discuss something specific, instead of a statement so general as to be...

29 December 2011 (UTC) Lede: While the lede is good, the information seems a bit muddled. I would delete "misnamed" from the lede sentence, you are giving...

Dialectric Hi Ne0, The scope of this article is challenging - according to the lede, it attempts to cover film, still photography, digital video, and digital...

it seem POV and I think you may be referring to the last paragraph of the lede, which I notice was unattributed. Sorry for the confusion. I just forgot...

particularly notable? Please modify the image caption to tell readers about this. Lede: outside of the alternate names, why are the citations needed? Citations...

character for which Milburn has any note. He was already mentioned in the lede of that article because of that role,[1] so I was a bit bold and pre-emptively...

the lede unless it has a fact that is not anywhere else sourced on the page. Hurricanehink (talk) 02:02, 10 December 2006 (UTC) That's not in the lede, though...

longer up to the current FA criteria. 1a Other than some weasel words in the lede all looks well. 1c There are multiple citation needed and dead link tags...

December 2022 (UTC) Comments after a quick skim: I suggest expanding the lede, per WP:LEDE The Background section might suffer from WP:OVERSECTION. Perhaps expand...

the article itself. Lemegeton 18:32, 29 August 2006 (UTC) I agree that the lede contains a bit of fat that should be trimmed, although "exceedingly long"...

prevent the use of more apt and illustrative images of the opera in the lede. Voceditenore (talk) 11:02, 17 February 2021 (UTC) Delete Per above and previous...

list article, the coverage of the topic as a whole only takes place in the lede and the bulk of the article is composed of sourced entries. There are some...

summarize something in the lede, and still leave information for the rest of the article. To put all the details in the lede makes it hard to read, and...

Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:43, 30 August 2020 (UTC) Could we split the lede into three paragraphs? The first is very large. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski...

the lede. I noticed a tendency to use passive voice even when it would be easy to use active voice. Usually active is more punchy and direct. Lede WP:LEAD...

2009 (UTC) Agree that the lede is much worse than the lede that gained FA status. The current version is far too detailed. A lede is supposed to be an introduction...

approach is to create a lede and a body, as described in Template:Biography. Then place the citations in the body. The lede is just a summary of the...

page to be to uphold two edits and positions made by Ethiopian Epic (The lede image and the wording of a particular sentence). Ethiopian Epic was topic...

forming on July 29 (in the lede) - this is odd. Did two two tropical depressions really form exactly on July 29? The second lede paragraph seems really long...

MOS and DTT compliant, so there should be no issues in that regard. The lede is indeed too short. Those two para-sentences are too short and should be...

beefed up (my own lacklustre) lede (also WIR-236) Elizabeth Frances Amherst (poet) beefed up (my own lacklustre) lede (also WIR-240) Else Kai Sass Elizabeth...

opposed to the stable lede version from the article itself. Therefore, if changes should be made, they should be done, at the lede of the article itself...

This will help cut down the options. The first proposal is having a single lede image that can be directly attributed with New antisemitism through a reliable...

and most noticeable portion of the lede, and should be the first item on the page. Following the infobox is the lede, the most important part of the article...

singling out controversy as a necessary element of the lede, WP:LEDE specifies that the lede should function as a stand-alone summary of the article...

has passed. Weight: a major issue can be mentioned in the lede section of a page (wp:LEDE), and considering wp:NOTNEWS, even a recent report could be...

January 2012 (UTC) Response: Upon checking, it actually IS in the article, the lede image actually. When I initiated this nomination, I used the "File usage"...

Scrooge200! I'd like to see the citations in the lede (which are for noncontroversial assertions) moved out of the lede and to the appropriate places in the sections...

Personally, I would include a clause about Stratford's religious beliefs in the lede but that's a fairly minor point. Otherwise the article looks good. Absolutelypuremilk...

Dwpaul Talk 21:53, 30 January 2014 (UTC) Further, the descriptive text in the lede ("Bachelor of Medicine and Bachelor of Surgery") is different than the page...

World War II, Horseshoe Curve was and still is a major rail line in the lede without any inline citation drew my rather hasty observation about documentation...

obvious issue is that there is no lede to speak of; in addition some third party references would be nice, but really the lede is the problem. One can assume...

Armenian-ness was enough to justify a place in the lede sentence it would be mentioned somewhere else in the lede, but it isn't. Put the Armenian in (early) Life...

I, centered largely at the Punishment article (Talk:Punishment/Archive 1#Lede issues). Before the punishment article, we three debated the introductory...

current technical name of the article that should be considered in the WP:LEDE and wherever it concerns. ("No other common name exists" see Talk:Treaty...

Thank you in advance! NumerounovedantTalk 15:37, 21 January 2017 (UTC) Lede "Produced by Priti Gupta and Manish Mundra under the banner of Ishka Films...

other similar featured lists. Emyil (talk) 15:11, 19 May 2020 (UTC) The lede could use expanding, if possible. ~ HAL333 22:51, 19 May 2020 (UTC) As the...

infobox, blanking mentions of racing and parliamentary inquiry from the lede and stating that RacingThePlanet is "now exclusively a retail company" with...

points: lede The lede strikes me as a little odd. Rather than informing me what a llama is, you've told me what it's not... Have a look at WP:LEDE, which...

obvious issue is that there is no lede to speak of; in addition some third party references would be nice, but really the lede is the problem. One can assume...

(UTC) Lede The lede serves as an introduction to the article and a summary of its most important aspects; for that reason, I think that the current lede could...

iteration of the article is not a good representation of that. I read the lede several times and I couldn't figure out what the scope of the article is...

information (not everything that can be sourced should be written of). The lede of this article is also too short (one sentence). It should summarise the...

introduced as such in the lede, but the rest of the article is supposed to explain itself own without the overview provided by the lede. The direct quotes used...

August 2010 (UTC) Delete - there's nary an assertion of notability in the lede, nor a reference anywhere in this BLP. Even if there were, I can not see...

covered in the lede and nutshell of WP:N.  It includes: WP:SUSTAINED (related to the nutshell), WP:NOT (lede), and all of the SNGs (lede), as well as the...

the content of an article that appears "above the fold"—usually just the lede section and the top of the infobox. This suggests that it would be easier...

on the basis that he dared put it in the lede and not in the body of the article. Or that he put it in the lede of an article with only one section instead...

(UTC) (edit conflict)Oppose Personally, I don't see great problems in the lede except with the number; the buildings listed are 35, but you treated 6 as...

around a fair bit - partly because I realised it was in the lede and not the main article - the lede version has been significantly reduced and a less reduced...

(1910)) and 3 have cites in their lede and 1 doesn't (although for one of the articles, they only have 2 cites in their lede). But there doesn't seem to be...

and lede text claim 6 soundtrack appearances, but that table shows only 4 titles. Lede: In "Following a ten year career", hyphenate "ten-year". Lede:The...

contribs) SkyWriter (talk · contribs) Avi (talk · contribs) Dispute over the lede sentence away from "religious movement" to "Christian movement" desired by...

(talk) 10:30, 25 December 2017 (UTC) Per WP:LEDE, an article this length should have a 2-3 para lede. The lede is currently a sentence, and a paragraph....

Buggie111 (talk) 18:54, 4 September 2011 (UTC) Comments from Jappalang Lede "Only one of the class (Reshadieh) was completed, having been seized by the...

If we tag the uncited claim in the lede, somebody might add a footnote there, instead of fixing things so the lede does what it is supposed to do: summarize...

a quick skim: Suggest merging the first and second paragraph of the lede. The lede focuses too much on the release of the first season. I would delete...

also sect. Cheers, — Cirt (talk) 14:25, 27 January 2014 (UTC) Good job. Lede "After initial difficulty with publication including a rejection by the Kansas...

dimensions used in the article. Alt text for the album cover is needed. Lede: "The disc was released on a standard CD as well as a DualDisc, with the...

the PDF case file embedded in the infobox and the first sentence of the lede should be turned into inline citations. Per WP:MOS#External links, ELs do...

this claim is true? Doing... Re: the first two bullets: I've reduced the lede to 2 paras. Started a section at the end (don't like the name, though, "Success...

problem with the lede because I wasn't entirely sure how to word it and simply went for broke. I was also open to a complete revamp of the lede. Check out the...

to linking works and publishers (first occurrence v. all the time). The lede/lead will need a good copy edit (for example, film titles, "Billboard" and...

have them. The lede (the first paragraph at least) delves into more "general information" than is typical for such lists where the lede mostly summarises...

December 2008 (UTC) Oppose. I see a lot of errors and clumsy mistakes. The lede is outright confusing. The 1997 Pacific hurricane season was the most active...

proper venue is featured list candidacy. But don't bother just yet. The lede needs to be three-four solid paragraphs, against the single sentence it is...

myself, but the DAB at Sacramento (disambiguation) flows through the R at its lede, which is obviously silly. Si Trew (talk) 00:42, 11 January 2015 (UTC) [...

matters if necessary. (The lede seeming quite long would be my only concern, but I imagine you don't want to bury the lede under the lists of ministers...

outlined. Among the main issues to address: the article lacks a lede section (see WP:LEDE), and the footnotes are largely from primary sources, or, such...

time to do so. I've re-examined the lede per your comments, and I feel that despite the list's brevity, the lede is of comparable size to the ledes of...

so inline citations in the lede would be redundant. For readability reasons, inline citations are discouraged in the lede (if you study featured BLPs...

but this list is by no-means exhaustive. In no particular order... The lede is all over the place. I suggest you look at Beagle to gain an idea to correctly...

a further note regarding the lede, the information about Benson's religious beliefs should be cited directly in the lede since it is contentious BLP material...

13:23, 17 July 2018 (UTC) Merge the lede into dnata and then redirect, Don't really see a reason to outright delete - Lede is useful as is the redirect. –Davey2010Talk...

read the article, what parts of the lede do you think can be reduced? (Which points are not important for the lede?) Also (2) what do you think of that...

Inconsistent citations in the notes section Inconsistent citations in the lede There were problems of WP:OWNership shortly after the list went through its...

they're nothing that would keep me from supporting this. More citations in the lede prose might be a good idea. Rather than blank spaces, how about putting "Independent"...

Jersey; it is clear the storm was well south of there at the time Y done - The lede could be better written. The first sentence is a bit bland (perhaps just...

article. In the lede, change "October 2010" over "late 2010" when talking about the "Sun of a Gun" single. In the final sentence of the lede, a reference...

Watch peer review Seen and addressed. Except I think that the 1 paragraph lede is appropriate, thoughts anyone? -- Avi (talk) 04:40, 28 April 2008 (UTC)...

of "rewriting" the article, they've kept mention of this fact out of the lede of the article, despite the fact it had been there for years, and despite...

East"mentioned ME The Lede map is rather redundant when compared to the labelled map. May I suggest removing the one in the Lede, and putting the labelled...

be mentioned in the lede. I'd like to see some mention of the evolution of the group and a description of their music in the lede. Hm, according to AndyZ's...

discussions. • Gene93k (talk) 03:25, 2 September 2017 (UTC) Delete -- The lede simply does not explain why subject is an encyclopedic topic. Rhadow (talk)...

{{re}} talk | contribs) 22:03, 20 July 2016 (UTC) Comment: I think that the lede in particular could do with some work. At the moment I feel that it presupposes...

any of the places I looked, and certainly the information should be in the lede. I would also like to know why such a detailed and apparently well-referenced...

references and resubmitted. I will comment on the second sentence in the lede paragraph, which states: "His films have been compared to the early, avant-garde...

Proudbolsahye (talk) 23:43, 12 September 2013 (UTC) Just some very quick comments: lede is awfully short for an article of this length, paragraphs are somewhat choppy...

length (typically at least 5,000 characters). ☐ The article has a short lede section that summarizes the most notable aspects of the subject's life and...

million US members as of 2021" in the lede used a primary source, can we find something more independent? The lede in general contains very little history...

AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 23:51, 15 August 2024 (UTC) Numerous uncited passages, bloated lede, reliance on block quotes, and unused sources in the "Further reading" section...

portions of this seem to be rather subjective, just reading through the lede. Busy weekend ahead, but I'll try to take a look. Kafka Liz (talk) 08:30...

lead section. Use this link to look up suitable articles: Pages missing lede sections. Add the article next to your name in the course page. Draft a new...

there's all this product information in the lede, followed by a short history section. What if we made the lede much shorter, followed by the history section...

undiscussed changes and restored info on Russian government ties in Sputnik's lede. Lo and behold, soon another single-purpose IP 81.145.207.242 restored Jackinscotland's...

minimum (except the lede). "See Members" in the infobox: do not link to another part of the article, per MOS:CIRCULAR The lede should include information...

and they are much more knowledgable than me with grammar and spelling. The lede is quite long; I suggest cutting it down to three paragraphs. "After the...

really, you can never have enough, right?). Here are some suggestions. Lede: First, I think the opening picture should be a little bit more illustrative...

some thoughts below: The lede is quite long. While the article can justify 3-4 paragraphs per MOS:LEDELENGTH, the current lede is really pushing those...

in intro/lede sect - perhaps it's just me but it seems unclear why word "vanguard" is in quotes here? 4th sentence in 3rd paragraph of lede/intro sect...

the US, it either needs to have that clearly and explicitly stated in the lede, or it needs to be renamed to List of notable credit unions in the United...

and the same applies to some other paragraphs in the lede. Lets hack some words out of the lede; but some more needs to go it. Its not all that clear...

article would have a citation at the end of every paragraph (except the WP:LEDE), as a minimum, and a some even have a citation after every sentence. I suggest...

-- ChrisTheDude (talk) 11:07, 25 April 2022 (UTC) Comments by MWright96 Lede: players eliminated in the quarter-finalists gained two" - this sentence...

organizational difficulties still. For instance, the first paragraph outside the lede is very short, comprising 2 sentences: the first about the candidates and...

soon! My reviews tend to focus on prose and MOS issues, especially on the lede, but I will also comment on anything that could be improved. I'll post up...

AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 11:11, 2 August 2023 (UTC) WP:MISSION in lede, short lede that is not a full summary, very long (imo unwarranted) list of publications...

read-through the final two paragraphs of the lede and combined them into one. Is there anything in the lede that is missing? Hoping you might find my comments...

after that... --Ling.Nut 03:22, 27 March 2007 (UTC) At first look, from the lede: "A revival of ethnic pride has been expressed in many ways by aborigines...

into something like "Commentary" or something similar. Per WP:LEDECITE, the lede doesn't need citations because the information should be in the rest of the...

the two years since, that wasn't just formatting, was one that updated the lede and infobox to show that he had left Ceahlăul Piatra Neamţ, and removed the...

days. Constantine ✍ 14:57, 7 January 2023 (UTC) Lede Can we add the regnal number footnote in the lede as well? And add who Tiberius II was? Done. I think...

improve it. Thanks, Skarmory (talk • contribs) 00:57, 10 January 2021 (UTC) Lede 1st sentence: describe what the storm is, not what it caused. Changed it...

"thou" as a Shakespearian affectation, and I'm hard put to think of a better lede image for this article. What do you propose — an image of a loaf of bread...

needing an edit to the lede). As per the AfD rules, the second point has no influence on the result of the AfD, but correcting the lede will give a better...

am going to fix some obvious small things. The lede is a bit too long and should be trimmed The lede should not contain any inline citations. Inline...

There may be exceptions to these guidelines from time-to-time, and the lede may not need many citations if the equivalent material is cited in the main...

too. CrazyC83 22:46, 20 December 2006 (UTC) Cite web formatting, longer lede, preparations, aftermath, and more impact that's not from government sites...

any new votes. Voting period ends on 22 Dec 2015 at 21:38:16 (UTC) Reason Lede image, already featured on Commons, 2,437 x 3,260 pixels Articles in which...

featured list, but it is not there yet. Issues I would like feedback on: 1) the lede needs to be significantly expanded, but since this list is a supporting article...

the length of the lede is that if a topic is important enough to merit a section heading, it's important enough to be in the lede. That's not the case...

that clearer. -- Scorpion0422 01:18, 8 February 2011 (UTC) Comments In the lede, there should probably be some context of who Homer is when he is first mentioned...

considerably its content by adding a substantial lede section, with an sufficient number of sources; a fitting lede image, an adequate "See also" section", and...

Landiien (talk) 14:43, 14 October 2010 (UTC) Comments from Jappalang The lede is a summary of the article and should contain the basics of explaining the...

Citations are absent in a significant portion of this article, and the lede is still one sentence too short (just checked again [2]). Promises to work...

deeper I've found plenty of other issues with it, too: FL?#1 and #2 Prose and Lede (I'll bunch these together because it's practically the same): * The prose...

Scewing (talk) 08:14, 12 October 2010 (UTC) Comments from Jappalang The lede is a summary of the article; here, it should be expanded to give an overview...

should probably be a citation at the end of every paragraph (except the lede) "People affiliated with the foundation" needs a lot more citations. Avoid...

also remove the "most recent" claim from the lede.— Rod talk 11:24, 26 April 2009 (UTC) Thanks for the lede. I personally believe the date column is a useful...

professionals?  Done Davest3r08 >:) (talk) 14:55, 22 December 2023 (UTC) The lede is quite short. It should summarise all aspects of the article: if there's...

Lede If possible, avoid the repetition of "do not apply", which is in both of the initial sentences. (note "does not apply" in final sentence of lede...

(UTC) The lede should be a summary of the article and should not include information that is not the article body. In a topic like this,the lede is going...

after a quick skim: The lede needs a major expansion to describe its notability and summarise the body of the article. See WP:LEDE for more detail. I think...

misunderstanding of what the lede is for; you see it in article after article. A surprisingly large faction seems to think that a lede is a formally required...

been resolved. This includes inconsistent formatting in the citations, a lede that needs expansion to cover the later parts of the occupation, and a disorganised...

from "2008", doesn't met WP:YEAR "which premiered on January 12, 2012." The lede is very small, a should be expanded upon, to a preferred three paragraphs...

fields archivedate and archiveurl. Per WP:LEADCITE, info presently cited in lede is non-controversial and not-contentious, as long as it's later same material...

overlap, but they are different concepts. A difference is explained in the lede of the page for mathematical finance: "[M]athematical finance will derive...

images · WP refs) · FENS · JSTOR · TWL) Do we need this? From the article's lede: «The United Nations (UN) war crimes prosecutors investigated the case in...

the talk page to say that I planned to edit the lede and was directed to this discussion. If the lede is supposed to give a brief summary of the article...

Rejectwater (talk) 19:21, 11 May 2013 (UTC) Comments by Cirt Per WP:LEAD, the lede intro sect is not supposed to introduce its own sourced info, but rather...

includes "Gulfshore Life" in the lede. If that is the case, then this would be usable just based on the strength of its lede alone. We can't use https://archive...

century section towards the end of the article. Adding a link to it in the lede should be nice. Fountains-of-Paris (talk) 16:56, 9 April 2016 (UTC) Comments...

feel about a lede which combined aspects of Option C and Option D -- I mean, one which (like Option C) kept the phrase VnT in the lede, and which used...

nid=3488. (First paragraph in lede, yikes.) Aaron Liu (talk) 19:32, 6 February 2024 (UTC) Recent edits have turned the lede paragraph into paraphrasing...

and pretty much anything. Tim riley talk 21:54, 19 September 2015 (UTC) Lede "he came to be regarded as an important but isolated musical figure." Generally...

whereas significant minority opinions may not merit a mention in an article lede because this might give them undue prominence, but may be worth a proportionate...

2013 (UTC) Good catch on the spelling. I've added the number of dead to the lede and a bit about the wreck's current status. Not much to work with as she...

lede sentences. I found an epilogue at the bottom! Normally epilogues at stand-alone interesting. My mind went numb again before the end of the lede sentence...

media outlets used as sources for the article. As for the "long name", the lede already contains a note in the first sentence regarding the name and the...

Astros4477 (Talk) 18:36, 21 September 2013 (UTC) At a glance: the writing in the lede needs smoothing. The rest could do with going over as well. The prose needs...

rewording of the content of the verifiability policy. Five versions of the lede are under discussion, along with 12 questions regarding the content. The...

with Ruhrfisch, especially regarding the lede. I know nothing about trains. The first sentence of the lede gives me no idea about what the "Docklands...

nearly ready for GA, but here are a few suggestions for improvement. The lede should be an inviting summary of the whole article rather than simply an...

"Famicom" is/was the system's name in Japan, no mention of that in your lede. other than that, looks solid and compelte to me. Deltwalrus (talk) 16:16...

unreasonable. User:Makemi I was wondering whether anyone was going to object to the lede image. I was hoping no one would complain. Since someone has, I have some...

reliable sources like the WSJ). As such, having both of these terms in the lede, to me, screams a BLP violation in favoring what others have said with subjective...

for nomination: 35th anniversary of event. I created the blurb using the lede, and did a copyedit of the article before this nom. Support as nominator...

for universities, it will be very beneficial to understand those, but a lede for every state is not possible in this list. e.g. Tamil Nadu changed from...

However, I did nothing to the lede or the infobox, pending outcome of this discussion. Article needs a new title, and a lede revised according to the new...

official be included in the lede. If this same statement is expanded upon later in the article, does it merit a position in the lede. Additional issues (added...

CassiantoTalk 22:25, 12 October 2013 (UTC) Leaning support Just a few things Lede: "(now Jakarta)" perhaps "today" instead of "now", as the "now" might be...

particular, I would like input on its legal definition, the text of the lede, and specific examples from history. However, everything about the article...

"and a total of 18 in all competitions." Same as above After re-reading the lede, I'm surprised that there is no mention of the team leaving the relegation...

need expansion of their performance histories (and/or separation of the performance history from the lede), copyediting, and much better referencing:...

created was because Kazuo Sakurada was well known by this title as a nickname/ alt title (See the lede of his page). —72 talk 11:21, 29 July 2017 (UTC)...

Comments, leaning support (and hope to be more prompt than the last one, sorry. Lede "incidents, including the Corfu incident" Can we avoid the repetition? Been...

most common pathways and make them easy to find Write a short and clear lede and/or {{nutshell}} summary Note when there is a simpler overview--or a more...

put up for review. Couple of things strike me early on - one is that the lede is short compared to articles like 1968 Summer Paralympics medal table, 1972...

incorporated into the aforementioned section. Finally, I did a full overhaul of the lede section, and it's now an overall overview of her career rather than just...

template, and have added a bit of Spider-Man: Original Motion Picture Score's lede to the Music section. I'm not sure what you mean by WP:IMDb though. — SirDot...

overview We can't agree on whether the ARWU ranking should be included in the lede. Have you tried to resolve this previously? Tried a third opinion, but the...

those mentioned in the lede. Do you think the image of Parker should be used? The award had no previous name. I have reworded the lede to mention the colloquial...

after a quick skim: The lede is too short. This should be expanded out to be a summary of all major points of the article. See WP:LEDE for more information...

period ends on 18 May 2015 at 21:33:49 (UTC) Reason Nice encyclopedic photo, lede image for the article, featured on Commons Articles in which this image appears...

Lightbreather (talk) 22:47, 23 February 2015 (UTC) The second sentence in the lede should have a citation; currently, the sentence says that the loophole refers...

(Talk)(Contribs) 12:36, 6 June 2023 (UTC) Comments after a quick skim: The lede can be expanded to incorporate more information from the body of the article...

taking up a large vertical space on the right. Could just have one map in the lede, and then show the other two in a separate section directly below, though...

of columnar cells" may be more appropriate and easily understood in the lede. Separating our content by sentence, paragraph and article helps compartmentalise...

incorporates her birthday being on two different dates and years. In the lede and infobox, it is listed as 24 January 1989, but in the personal life section...

linked here Review representative Wikipedia medicine page (with 4-paragraph lede) - https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cefalexin Complete CP 133 CLE discussion...

term for..." All the information in the lede should be also be discussed elsewhere in the article. The lede gives plenty of causes of cerebral hypoxia...

-done The TED Talk should be removed from the lede or added to the body as the main purpose of a lede is to summarize the article's body.-done "Alfred...

WB article (the nav box, the one featured logo image, the lede) or a click away (the lede from the TV shows on the nav box). This adds nothing to the...

likely dead - access denied (ref #42). Lede too short per WP:LEDE - 74K characters and only a two paragraph lede. Per WP:LEADLENGTH, its a guideline and...

Appalachian Field Recordings String band — expand Roscoe Holcomb — expand (good lede already) Henry Reed (musician); expand Ola Belle Reed — expand Sarah Ogan...

of avoiding any contention in the future, I think the statements in the lede should also be cited. This directly contradicts what was said in the GA review...

editing an introduction. I rewrote the entire lede, removing most of the ESSA-6 stuff (it was irrelevant for a lede) and trying to copyedit it at the same time...

start this new AfD, since the first AfC was rather poorly attended. The lede of the article is a verbatim copy from Yazidis in Syria. As far as I remember...

Comment — Fascinating stuff. Something that might be helpful is expanding the lede to include more about the development of the type. As the article says, the...

with size and big when dealing with importance or notability.  Done In the lede, it's stated that the city's water quality is good, but I don't see a citation...

21 April 2020 (UTC) Keep - Prose looks pretty solid in this article. The lede could be a tiny bit longer, to ensure it accurately summarises any pertinent...

uses" section, and the 2nd paragraph of the lede is WP:SYNTH and should be removed. The last sentence of the lede is trivia also and shouldn't be in the article...

in the article, not an actual answer. Genre isn't consistent between the lede, infobox, prose—try to keep one consistent throughout all three (at least...

York in infobox is excessive More New York name should be pushed to the lede SoHo/NoHo rezoning should be SoHo and NoHo rezoning Adding more image to...

12:33, 3 May 2007 (UTC) One thing: I would remove the external jump in the lede section. Wiki-linking the town name and listing this link along with the...

obscure subject. Here are my first impressions, mostly minor fixes: Lede: The lede is far too short. For an article this size, something similar to the...

is in the caption and what year it was that he's holding up the trophy? Lede/intro is indeed four paragraphs long per WP:LEAD, but lopsided sizes of the...

distribution in the lede currently present).Icewhiz (talk) 11:14, 15 April 2018 (UTC) Merge to Spinosauridae#Localities. While the lede of that article mentions...

Signs of this include, but are not limited to: Laundry lists in the body or lede of an article of minor facts or events relating to the main topic of the...

WP refs) · FENS · JSTOR · TWL) Several sources are outdated; There is no lede section; but most glaringly: I have my doubts that this is truly notable...

(talk) 20:13, 21 June 2021 (UTC) Do we need to state home console in the lede? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:18, 16 July 2021 (UTC) I...

I will expand on the rebels in the lede now. Again the lede also requires some background within it per wp:lede. I have fixed your isseu with the infobox...

15:52, 9 July 2007 (UTC) Lede - While I personally like how it's written in the article, I have concern that this part of the lede won't pass through as...

they can be translated! That's why we're currently working on medical good lede criteria! The idea is to have a similar peer review process to good article...

utility · Interaction Timeline · SPI Tools BManning08 made this edit to the lede in the article in Feb 2024 https://en.m.wikipedia.org/w/index.php...

Catholic tradition is meant to reduce the Church's exposure to criticism. EB Lede: We're at an impasse. Here's what I'd like next. I'm willing to start over...

at WP:LIBRARY, Google Scholar, WP:RS/P and your local library system. The lede could possibly be expanded, especially if more sources are added. I hope...

another reviewer to check over it Public opinion on climate change - needs lede expanded Carbon capture and storage - condensing and updating needed Heat...

that source, I was unable to find reference to anything contained in the lede paragraph, preceding that citation. i.e., nothing about its formation "in...

lead section. Use this link to look up suitable articles: Pages missing lede sections. Add the article next to your name in the course page. Draft a new...

(Interlacing my replies here.) OK, I have eliminated that kind of language from the lede. --IJBall (contribs • talk) 17:26, 18 September 2015 (UTC) The lead should...

from Jappalang Lede The lede is a summary of the main text, and should not contain material not found in the main body. Check the lede for any material...

FAC. Here's a small list of things I saw quickly: WP:LEDECITE MOS:LEDE says the lede section should be no more than four paragraphs Article in general...

however, belong in the lede. —Katolophyromai (talk) 00:19, 28 October 2021 (UTC) I've never argued that it belongs in the lede. By all mean, move it....

(UTC) No, it should not be in the lede... as I stated above, the lede should be generalized. While it is fine for the lede to say that the Men's rights movement...

An example would help, too. The article violates WP:LEDE in that there's information in the lede that's not elaborated elsewhere (the history of the method's...

info. Trevor MacInnis (Contribs) 18:03, 9 September 2007 (UTC) Support. The lede is a little on the light side, and several sentence/paragraphs in Development...

21:55, 26 June 2009 (UTC) Comments by Firestorm The lede needs to be redone to conform to WP:LEDE. In particular, it should be two or three paragraphs...

points: Linking in the lede has two links for South Korea, but none for LAHAT. The two sentences in the last paragraph of the lede that both begin "The...

rewording many of these sentences so this pattern is less apparent. In the lede it says "...is a Paralympic alpine skier...". Since Paralympic is not linked...

after a quick skim: The lede is quite short. I suggest that other sections from the article that are not mentioned in the lede be included. There are a...

understand you correctly, you feel it should be re-assessed for failing 1b(lede) with minor copy editing? What about the excessive use of primary sources...

(UTC) Oppose - Largely per ChrisTheDude. Not a bad list overall, but the lede seems a bit short and the tables have too many columns with Unknown labels...

12:42, 12 March 2010 (UTC) Delete after a lengthy and fruitless search. The lede begins "P. Paul Verma is a well known Indian film director, film producer...

that the article does not deal solely with the murders--and I changed the lede sentence to clarify that they are not necessarily even the primary notability...

2024 (UTC) I would agree with this interpretation of policy. Reviewing the lede section -- not a sentence, as the nomination claims -- there's nothing that...

details. Suffice to say the first thing that jumps out at me is that the WP:Lede needs some work. Starting out with definitions, ala "Webster's dictionary...

—TechnoSquirrel69 (sigh) 06:12, 4 January 2024 (UTC) Comments after a quick skim: The lede typically doesn't need citations, per MOS:CITELEDE, as the information is...

paragraph (WP:lede) Properties (optional), the physical appearance of the material (at STP) Often this content is included in the lede. Unless notable...

July 2025 (UTC) There's some stuff in the lede that isn't included within the body. For instance, the lede begins with summarizing the history of fishing...

page.‎ The result was delete per WP:CSD#G11, copyright infringement (entire lede text was same as start of project wiki, which had no obvious GFDL or other...

Wikipedia:Featured list criteria. Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Lead section, the list's lede adequately stands alone as a concise overview of Rooney's international goals...

Improvement wise, the first thing standing out to me is a glaring redlink in the lede. There's differing opinions on redlinks (some say it encourages article creation)...

indicate original pronunciation; when it is necessary to maintain consistency in the article. Wikipedia:Naming conventions (Indic) Template:Indic script lede...

(talk) 01:31, 5 March 2014 (UTC) Comment Leaning support. A few issues. Lede "for repairs. The IJN was running out of fuel by this time and decided not...

it is forced. From the same guideline, references shouldn't appear in the Lede when they can be used in the main text. Done --haha169 (talk) 19:17, 9 August...

applications for DE filters which other designs do not cover. As it says in the lede, distributed element filters are used in the same applications as lumped...

(UTC) Reason Encyclopedic illustration of an irregular galaxy, and is the lede image for two articles. Articles in which this image appears Galaxy, Irregular...

the films articles don't mention the award in the lede sentence and many don't mention it in the lede at all. Other things (such as genre, location and...

used AzureFury's "article" as the lede. I removed AzureFury's lede, and replaced it with a lede (the consensus-lede) by the editors (including me) who...

0, so it is acceptable for use here. The first sentence of the article's lede needs to have an inline citation that verifies S. Shankar as the director...

earlier this year. Thanks, Hanshans23 (talk) 14:28, 7 November 2020 (UTC) The lede of the article too closely paraphrases the "Western Marxism" entry in the...

do fine at FAC in due course. Specific things: Lede It is only necessary to reference within the lede if it is not supported elsewhere in the article...

Does the WP:LEDE summarize the main points of the article? Ling.Nut (talk) 14:26, 12 January 2008 (UTC) To answer myself, no the lede doesn't seem to...

read the lede and thought Wikipedia:Wikipedia is not for things made up one day. However, see the references. This is a real book. The lede should be...

the lead was weak and was mostly a copy of the lede of the Taj Mahal article. Indeed this article's lede and photo of the Taj made it appear this article...

Parsecboy (talk) 16:17, 11 February 2019 (UTC) The detailed dates in the lede strike me as redundant to the main body. I generally like to include month...

ends on 2 Mar 2014 at 19:06:50 (UTC) Reason High resolution, good quality, lede image in an important and well-developed article. Articles in which this...

there's a better one (it's not a topic area that I edit often). Build the lede, which is too short. It should summarise the article's contents. Include...

the lede/article sounds like right now); although I think there are many sources that will establish her notability. Perhaps we could clarify the lede to...

article for all of Wikipedia. See WP:NN. Complaint above seems to say that lede should be changed to reflect notability requirements, which are the same...

(see Wikipedia:Naming conventions (chemistry)#Groups of compounds). The lede of the article should introduce the class of compound, noting general characteristics...

article should be a standalone summary of the entire article's contents. The lede intro is therefore a bit too short right now. — Cirt (talk) 20:10, 14 October...

sourcing, and multiple paragraphs outside of the storm section (either in lede or a season summary section); nominated at WP:GAC and passed A class — Season...

merging to the port? I disagree with the rejections for inline citations. The lede and history section are plain and simple, in-line citations are not required...

reading through the whole article, I do feel the need to note that that lede is quite long. I would suggest trimming it down to no more than two or three...

2008 (UTC) I redid and regularized the refs and cites and suggested a WP:LEDE rewrite on the article talk page. -- Boracay Bill (talk) 23:17, 24 August...

Please allow me some time to gather them. I won't be able to help with the lede nor the lack of content in the shootout era. Perhaps another editor would...

Mitchazenia 22:06, 2 April 2007 (UTC) Needs more work. Specifically, the lede should be longer. The storm history should be longer. The image caption in...

and Nielsen Ratings (where available). In addition, the article features a lede that has been tailored to give a brief summary of the article, as well as...

life at the beginning of the article, before any headings (this is the "lede section"). Frances Shimer (1826–1901), born Frances Ann Wood, was an American...

as represented by the fact that this article is linked in that article's lede. GreenReaper (talk) 10:21, 3 September 2016 (UTC) Mostly merge to a comparative...

(or "lede") paragraphs are formatted differently, see WP:lede, especially the part on "Introductory text". The last sentence of the current lede needs...

"Vaughan" of mindhacks.com reports that a bit of Wikipedia text he wrote, the lede of the article Capgras delusion, appeared as dialogue in the 2008 film The...

I agree that much of the article should not be merged, but most of the lede is easily verified and should be preserved somewhere. Cool Hand Luke 16:03...

You can change the caption since we already have thid information in the lede. I would place ref 6 at the end of the sentence. Otherwise a very good list...

submarine, bomber, scuttled (all in the lede) Done Add Kaiserlich Marine in parenthesis after German Imperial Navy in the lede Done Link secondary armament, Kattegat...

to disagree with my comments. I will give comments as if this was an FAC. Lede "and was deeply affected upon his assassination" Replace "upon" with "by"...

Likewise, the lede should be better focused on Lidia and explain the Max situation a little better. Be very careful with explanation, as the lede should be...

October 2007. Added October 11, 2007. Do we need the bullet points in the lede? I suggest making it into prose. kawaputratorque 18:23, 10 October 2007 (UTC)...

referred to as Robinson or Joan. As it stood, the first paragraph in the lede was confusing, since it seems like Joan got killed twice. Once I kind of...

Disaster emergencies aren't important enough, IMO, to be mentioned in the lede. The first sentence in the second paragraph sounds like all of the damage...

enormously on the lede. This creates per se the potential for conflicts. Many times I insisted in the necessity to have in the lede only absolutely non-contested...

article needs judicious pruning, a general copyedit for wikistyle, work on the lede, a check for peacock terms/advert, etc. I would do it myself, but I had some...

to the lede of Nuon Chea: [1]. On May 2, 2020, TheTimesAreAChanging removed it, calling it an "unnecessary addition to the longstanding lede." [2]. Since...

help: Over 14,000 articles need their lede (or "lead") improving. More than 2,000 have no lede at all! The lede is the most-read part of any article....

thing is, by and large, the Hungarian League should confer notability. The lede of WP:NSPORT explicitly says that it is to be used as rule of thumb, and...

FL-guidelines in some regards (particularly for the formatting/structure of the lede), I don't think this should preclude a FL-nomination for this or any other...

CinemaScore (#25) are incomplete references. I removed a sentence from the lede which referenced a not elaborated-on acronym (WGWA) and had a [citation needed]...

I recall this was originally placed in the lede section, but the desire to have citations even in the lede prompted finding an example that could be attributed...

problematic. He would do well, if in his personal subjective opinion is that the lede would be better if made longer (his very first bullet), to follow wp:sofixit...

Keep I edited the article to try and improve it, although parts (e.g. the lede) still need work and better citing. There's a couple of substantial news...

for the article all points back to these routine items. For example the lede tells us that "Head of Operational Risk of First Bank of Nigeria and joined...

18:52, 15 September 2012 (UTC) I will add a bit about the Bond stuff in the lede later today. -- CassiantoTalk 08:49, 15 September 2012 (UTC) Now done. SchroCat...

—Eli355 (talk • contribs) 00:51, 27 November 2018 (UTC) That statement in the lede of the article is referenced, and points to an article on ZDNet. That article...

On the lead (lede), it did occur to me that perhaps some bits could be cut-&-pasted down into the article--either to a sort of sub-lede under "Life" or...

things I see, but some might be nitpicking, so feel free to ignore them: Lede: " in the fourth and fifth centuries AD", should it be "fourth or fifth"...

inadequate. XXSNUGGUMSXX (talk) 19:53, 2 June 2014 (UTC)  Done Made the lede neutral.--Shane Cyrus (talk) 05:12, 3 June 2014 (UTC) Shane Cyrus Its nice...

specifically, one half of the lede is about the product's name! It needs to be pared down, footnoted, moved to another section. The lede is for introducing how...

the Lead/Intro is a bit long, no need to go into that much detail. The lede could do without the two quotes in the fourth paragraph, and without the...

(UTC) Comments by Wehwalt Responses marked "-NH" are from User:Neutralhomer. Lede -  Done I'd like to see, immediately after the first sentence some discussion...

previous reviewer, I do believe the point about the lede is a valid one. Some expansion of the lede to make it a fuller summary of the material in the...

Rambo's Revenge (talk) 12:21, 18 October 2009 (UTC) Comments Per WP:LEAD, lede should summarize entire article. Early life is wholly unsourced. Early life...

and now also the lede.[18][19] There was a previous successful DR where the consensus was to keep the wording "pseudoscience" in the lede and the body. See...

(UTC) Redirect to Robert Steven Rhine, who, according to that article's lede, is largely notable in connection with this magazine. JJL (talk) 03:08, 30...

nominating this featured article for review because of unsourced statements, the lede containing information that is not cited in the body, and the article needs...

the size of the event. Added 9-15 people to the lede, as I added information about the riot to the lede. Z1720 (talk) 02:57, 10 August 2021 (UTC) Should...

23:03, 1 October 2022 (UTC) Here are some comments after a quick skim: The lede is too long. Per MOS:LEDELENGTH aim for 3-4 paragraphs, max.  Done Second...

of neighborhood it is. The lede section is summary. Actually you should look at guidelines on writing ledes, see wp:lede. I have seen another frequent...

decision. --Redtigerxyz Talk 05:45, 10 July 2009 (UTC) I have expanded the lede and commented out the unsupported statement leaving notes in the reassessment...

two reasons. First, it is acceptable to omit references in the lede, as long as the lede summarizes points made in the main body, and the points are referenced...

extensiveness of the coverage. Thanks, Sotakeit (talk) 10:28, 28 April 2015 (UTC) Lede What is Grade II? c. → circa History Is there any information about Roger...

FAC FAR hist histmerge HotCat HTML includeonly indef infobox interwiki ISO lede linkified linkify LUA meatpuppet MediaWiki MfD navbox nbsp noinclude nowiki...

a proposals format for discussing the lede section, where we can together discuss potential changes to the lede and compromise until we come to an agreement...

notable person Articles in which this image appears Charles III of Spain (lede image) FP category for this image Wikipedia:Featured pictures/People/Royalty...

parens along with UK, United Kingdom. No sense in having two sentences of the lede deal with this. Kaisershatner 14:50, 7 April 2006 (UTC) I agree. So I modified...

a peak from at least 12 hours (06:00–18:00 UTC on October 4).TAM § Lede The lede's first paragraph seems to focus too much on intensity minutiae and doesn't...

amount of detail in the lede and in the class paragraphs. Are they appropriate; if not what needs to be added or deleted? Does the lede cover everything that...

File:Mike Jackson 2.jpg to the TFA blurb. I'm not sure if the other photo in the lede is entirely free for TFA use. If neither image is useable, I'd recommend...

Stephen_B._Young (history · last edit) from [1]. Many sections including the lede is lifted directly from the pdf file available online. Unomi (talk) 08:30...

Ok! Iry-Hor (talk) 21:17, 11 February 2015 (UTC) Lede section: "Fifth Dynasty" is used in the lede, while "5th Dynasty" is used in other parts of the...

summary more frequently. Doesn't have to be in detail, shorthands (like 'lede', 'sp' or 'reply') is perfectly okay. - Mailer Diablo 22:13, 31 December...

is too much for the lede, but I added a sentence summarizing the "modern relevance" section. With this addition, I believe the lede can stand on its own...

(UTC) I would vote against this retaining GA status. At the very least the lede needs reorganization/rewriting and it needs to drop shoddy references (there...

26 March 2020 (UTC) Delete - Putting the $5*10**10 (even if true) in the lede is promotional enough to delete at MFD. Robert McClenon (talk) 04:32, 27...