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identifies the article's subject and distinguishes it from other subjects. Concision – The title is not longer than necessary to identify the article's subject...

question that has to be answered at AFD. SoWhy 12:29, 6 September 2017 (UTC) Concision (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)...

essay/proposal: Wikipedia talk:Concision razor#Userfy without redirect. The specific primary problem with both Wikipedia:Concision razor and the related Wikipedia:Miscellany...

Guide to deletion (glossary) Help, my article got nominated for deletion! Concision (media studies) (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch |...

this edit from one IP using "concision and clarity" as an edit summary [1] and this edit from the second IP using "Concision, elimination of redundancies...

identifies the article's subject and distinguishes it from other subjects. Concision – The title is not longer than necessary to identify the article's subject...

show why your suspicion that the accounts are connected is reasonable. Concision is key. Evidence should be presented in a concise format. Because of the...

been corrected. Before renomination for FA status we need to edit for concision, to 50 kbs. Wv235 17:00, 16 February 2006 (UTC) Transportation/Airports...

--BDD (talk) 16:08, 9 October 2014 (UTC) Wikipedia:Concision razor → User:Born2cycle/Concision razor (links to redirect • history •...

part of this trip, so consider cutting the excess detail for the sake of concision. "Despite enjoying himself, Chomsky was appalled by the country's Jewish...

Watch • Watch article reassessment page • Most recent review Result: Concision is definitely needed here, along with a better appreciation of WP:NOT...

trifle short, but I can't think of anything more that needs to be said, so I should praise its concision instead. -- ALoan (Talk) 21:11, 29 Mar 2005 (UTC)...

material. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 10:52, 5 October 2023 (UTC) Fails 1a (concision) and 3b (unnecessary detail). This article has ballooned up to 19,000...

2025 (UTC) Promoted in 2011. This article needs a lot of copyediting for concision and evaluation of due weight. Several unreliable sources are used, mainly...

concision) Changed. -Bryan Rutherford (talk) 19:54, 2 January 2020 (UTC) "...Austria conceded to Prussia the large majority of Silesia..." (concision...

fictional character. Note the quantity of out-of-universe content, and the concision with in-universe content. Family Guy wiki — a Family Guy-specific site...

would continue to win it consecutively three more times" - rephrase for concision Watch for comma splices "there were calls for party renewal, again" -...

think I can complete my review. I'll note you should keep improving on concision and removing unnecessary information. Randomly jumping into the list "Kirito...

are other things which should be considered: ease of use, precision, concision, and consistency among article titles; and a system constraint: we cannot...

and have suitable captions: Overall: Pass or Fail: First paragraph, concision. His attending of the school because of Mamori Anezaki is unnecessary...

writing in the article. Whilst I will continue to work on copyediting and concision, it would be great to seek other perspectives on how this article could...

show why your suspicion that the accounts are connected is reasonable. Concision is key. Evidence should be presented in a concise format. Because of the...

explorer celle-ci et y naviguer rapidement. Ils doivent résumer avec concision le contenu de la section. 'Bonne pratique : placer systématiquement les...

Huge blocks of paragraphs with varying ideas makes me wonder about its concision or structure. GA-wise, it looks like it has a good chance of passing....

survive, it needs to be renamed to James Herndon (psychologist), for WP:CONCISION. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Xurizuri (talk • contribs) 03:14...

one exists. AtticusX (talk) 04:24, 10 November 2015 (UTC) [edited for concision] Note: This debate has been included in the list of Language-related deletion...

are other things which should be considered: ease of use, precision, concision, and consistency among article titles; and a system constraint: we cannot...

novel. In answer to your question, both summary and synopsis intimate concision and overview – for our purposes, we should view the two terms as overlaping...

are the Ms? Thank you. Imagine Reason (talk) 11:51, 24 April 2023 (UTC) Concision (also called "conciseness", "succinctness", "brevity", or "laconicism")...

reason why any salvageable material can't be dealt with (with appropriate concision) as part of the parent article.- Simon Dodd { U·T·C·WP:LAW } 17:01, 4...

dross and delete it. Strunk and White, however, were unambiguous that concision does not require "the writer make all his sentences short, or that he...

not be used in article titles or the bold lead, they may be useful for concision in tables (for example, list of Roman consuls is introduced with a key...

contributions to this template. Users need to strike the ideal balance between concision and relevance in relation to the content. Guermantes 02:59, 8 August 2006...

concise at the same time; my advice is generally to err on the side of concision. I'll seek feedback through the peer review process before final polishing...

depending on the location" - how about "varies by location" or similar? More concision needed Y revision Puffin Let's talk! 17:07, 8 January 2013 (UTC) Check...

to do one more top-to-bottom copyedit to look for nits and to improve concision and prose flow where possible before going to GAN. If you find these few...

named, so I don't agree that this content should be deleted. Edited for concision, on the other hand, yes. --Arxiloxos (talk) 00:05, 8 March 2012 (UTC)...

WP:MUSICBIO #1, 4, 9 & 11. The article does need to be edited for clarity, concision and neutral tone.shaidar cuebiyar (talk) 04:20, 10 August 2017 (UTC) Relisted...

think that some of the article needs to be rewritten for clarity and concision. --Mike Hopley 00:20, 4 August 2006 (UTC) In the present form it is not...

jp/naruto/ external link dead? Not a big enough issue to raise, I find concision could be further improved. Jumping randomly into the article "However...

recast to avoid the game over semicolon mentioned above Lots of room for concision I'd stack the refs that assert that the game was on par with the original—no...

don't need a long overview of the plot in an encyclopedia... Lack of concision is the most critical problem. All of the FAs on books are more concise...

of overlap, merging this article into the tour article would improve concision and avoid redundancy. The concert special could be summarized in a dedicated...

drafting. Do you think it's good as is, or perhaps we should condense for concision in places? Also would be good to come up with some graphics for inclusion...

article needs copyediting to omit needless words and maintain encyclopedic concision, or if it might need to be split. If the article is in the top 0.1%, then...

~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 21:55, 25 October 2023 (UTC) Fails 1a (concision) and 3b (unnecessary detail). At nearly 15,000 words, this article likely...

those pages. The history section is, in my opinion, at the right level of concision as it is. The title of each subsection needs to be changed in accordance...

wondering why he didn't just say that. Three fewer words, one fewer syllable, concision and all that. I get that writers decide for themselves exactly which words...

"with plus -ing" sentences throughout the article and modifying them for concision and clarity. Link Tamil on first use in the lead.  Done -- ♪Karthik♫ ♪Nadar♫...

glaze over at the walls of perfectly cited text, so I've come to prefer concision over completeness. It's one thing to worry about editor participation...

size issues may be indicative of genuine GA problems with coverage (3a), concision and focus (1a and 3b), or the use of summary style. Mistakes to avoid...

Subtitles and possessives used for brand recognition may be omitted for concision, unless they are being used for natural disambiguation. Examples: Hobbs...

(UTC) Thanks for pointing that out - I agree I should probably go for concision and avoid coloring the rationale with a description of the title as it...

disagree. Userfication is the best option. My apologies if my effort at concision comes across as emotive/arguing, which is not my intent at all. For context...

Categorical perception - (12056) - keep - closed 06:14, 16 December 2017 (UTC) Concision - (13313) - keep - closed 12:29, 6 September 2017 (UTC) Matter of fact...

strike me as being terribly incorrect — in some cases some increased concision would be good but otherwise they carry the basic facts across. Just a...

the WP:COMMONNAME for the country: "Within North Korea, propaganda...". Concision. I don't think "propagation" can be used like that in the first sentence...

bloated. --MelanieN (talk) 23:48, 31 August 2018 (UTC) Keep: could use some concision, but this is a valid topic and stand-alone article is appropriate. K.e...

but merge the entire contents, though possibly rewrite for clarity on concision of expression. The continuity between the episodes can be best shown in...

I've re-integrated the old lede into the lede and edited it mildly for concision. The nomination does not appear to be correct that a "significant amount...

preserved within one of Canada's National Urban Parks." - I'd recast this for concision and better prose flow. Suggestion: "Although industry occupies much of...

unduly wordy. If you can cut this down even more, you are very welcome. Concision is a virtue. ..... The anachronism is of a prediction (even if non-serious)...

article about some claimed business method. This similarly seems to lack concision and clarity. - Smerdis of Tlön (talk) 14:07, 22 April 2008 (UTC) Keep...

the character's appearance and transformations. I suggest improving the concision of the plot summary. DragonZero (Talk · Contribs) 10:31, 11 February 2017...

only looking for missing commas but for ways of tightening the prose. Concision would help the length of the article and make the reading a bit snappier...

instance I boldly cut it myself but the article might benefit from a concision editing pass specifically focused on the quotations. Similarly, academic...

a duck to me.. ∰Bellezzasolo✡ Discuss 19:05, 8 January 2019 (UTC) For concision, Jiangye's summaries here, here, and here are entirely consistent with...

MOS:TITLE gives five goals: recognisability, naturalness, precision, concision and consistency. Honestly, I think the current title is fine for all of...

much larger FACs are regularly promoted. But prune for readability and concision. Tony 02:18, 29 July 2006 (UTC) So... what's the verdict? I believe all...

I've noticed about British journalists is, what they gain in brevity and concision, they more than pay for in accuracy. JFD 18:45, 30 August 2006 (UTC)...

articles Similar edit summaries: note characteristic use of the word 'concision' Please note that I strongly believe I have not discovered all associated...

the Overview section should probably be included with some editing for concision, and everything else should be edited down. Cheers, Suriname0 (talk) 18:32...

as a sub or its own standalone section. Reviews to me feels lacking in concision. It would work much better if paragraphs were organised by individual...

peak of number ninety on the US Hot R&B/Hip-Hop Songs chart." Improve concision, also note a hard space between number and ninety. Changed. Azealia911...

thanks very much. I made the edit you suggest in the lead, where we want concision, but in the body I think it's clearer the way it is. Happy to discuss...

were your suggestions about the lead, which I re-wrote for clarity and concision. The lead included a nest of passive-voice verbs that User:Epicadam had...

possibly followed by a copyedit from an experienced editor with a focus on concision. Best wishes, ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 11:45, 12 September 2024 (UTC)...

be corrected in the direction of increased clarity for readers, over concision. WP:RECOGNIZABLE and WP:PRECISE trump WP:CONCISE and WP:CONSISTENT. The...

degree subjective, but my main suggestion for this article is to aim for concision. Done. Layout The large number of attractive images is instantly apparent...

Suggest revisions and point to sources on the talk page Edit a section for concision and clarity If you have thirty minutes each week . . . Expand a pre-existing...

--Midnightdreary (talk) 23:13, 15 August 2008 (UTC) I'm awfully fond of concision, and I wouldn't make the article any longer. Reader fatigue sets in at...

but moving some information to other articles might also be helpful for concision. Toadspike (talk) 12:40, 5 October 2023 (UTC) Support as per nom Wil540...

Same primary problem as Wikipedia:Miscellany for deletion/Wikipedia:Concision razor - an essay dominated by one editor advancing an interpretation of...

incivility and rejection of consensus have never been captured with such concision. Not to mention peacock language. Other editors are effectively blackmailed...

Currently, that is a redirect to Concision. If we go with a simple merge of Succinctness into it, would the Concision pagename be more appropriate? --Tryptofish...

doesn't bother me, but someone will likely complain at FAC. For the sake of concision: "managing the household" --> "household management" or "home management"...

RA+Rap-Up, Mars said that..." based on your attached sources. Though for concision, I think the former would be better. That's all from me. -- Carlobunnie...

will see that I can rise to the occasion, which does at times require concision. To one final regard, the bigger problem I had at my first RfA, was the...

jp/naruto/ external link dead? Not a big enough issue to raise, I find concision could be further improved. Jumping randomly into the article "However...

planets". What do you mean by "substantial"? Sorry to be a stickler for concision, but why "amongST"? Nowadays, "among" is the default. "Venus's surface...

identifies the article's subject and distinguishes it from other subjects. Concision – The title is not longer than necessary to identify the article's subject...

"released a statement to the press" --> Maybe remove "to the press" for concision "The Dark Knight trilogy inspired a trend in future superhero films seeking...

BigzMMA (talk) 10:29, 8 December 2011 (UTC) How do you come to that concision, what coverage exists is just routine of a sporting event, nether the...

inside a quote WP for sale User signature without any links Deletion tags concision and brevity Wikipedia:Help_desk/Archives/2013 May 19 Nominated Image For...

policy-related contributions; user Talk edits high and have clarity and concision; mainspace edits also of high quality and all have edit summaries too...

comment on the discussion so far? There has been comment on meeting the concision point within constraints. I offer a technical proposal. Look, and I was...

the groups he was involved in, but it's nothing major. A few cuts for concision would go a long way. Is it neutral? It represents viewpoints fairly and...

your work, course tutors will take into account the accuracy, clarity, concision and critical evaluation of your presentation. Please note that this assignment...

periodicals); WP's house style isn't to encourage repetitious writing but concision. This is a relatively short and simple case. James Plumptre was drafted...

fairly light-touch, though did make useful observations on style and concision (courtesy ping to Amitchell125 as reviewer), and that the PR attracted...

lead mention, particularly Lorena Wiebes who won two? Try and focus on concision. Look at other FA-class cycling articles, e.g. 2012 Tour de France. Body...

because all movies taken together do form a notable unity. For the sake of concision, I'll leave that discussion aside for the moment. But I'll grant that:...

think I can complete my review. I'll note you should keep improving on concision and removing unnecessary information. Randomly jumping into the list "Kirito...

comprehensive context and analysis with the requisites of brevity and concision. It was a pleasure to help out with it. – Scartol · Talk 12:11, 19 September...

blossom" newspaper headlines that additionally drop words to achieve more concision. "Met together" is probably an attempt to overcome the ambiguousness of...

August 2008 (UTC) Keep - However, it needs to be shortened for greater concision and be thoroughly cleaned up and copyedited. Also brings up an interesting...

reporting results. Since it's a speech, there's a different trade-off between concision and precision. The behavioral subtyping article, in contrast, appeared...

concern and the prose is lacking in many spots and needs to be polished for concision and "punchiness". ~ HAL333 17:51, 5 October 2024 (UTC) Kyle Peake? FrB...

the merged list at Tales of Graces. Don't I deserve some faith that my concision/merge is an improvement? DragonZero (Talk · Contribs) 12:54, 9 December...

MER-C 14:31, 22 November 2019 (UTC) Suggestion - For greater clarity & concision, we should consider renaming all such categories using the formulation...

others' views/opinions on Musk, and you reverted it with the summary "Concision, status quo in article formatting". (What does "status quo in article...

GTB's position is that Concision alone indicates no preference between the two; that "Mohandas Karamchand Gandhi" meets the Concision criterion just as well...

the title. Unnecessary use of parenthetical disambiguation violates the concision and precision criteria for article titles. This corollary of article title...

b~~({\text{mod}}~5)} as a ≡ b {\displaystyle a\equiv b} for the sake of concision. Using the fact that modular congruence is a congruence relation with...

Ingratis (talk) 18:10, 27 March 2022 (UTC) What your comment lacks in concision it also lacks in accuracy. The suggested target articles contains no coverage...

would help make the title much more precise at this cost of a little concision. I hope that would address some of the nominators concerns. Firefangledfeathers...

your work, course tutors will take into account the accuracy, clarity, concision and critical evaluation of your presentation. Please note that this assignment...

the article. His strong edits and advice improved both the prose and concision in the article. March–April 2010: Yllosubmarine (talk · contribs) at Wikipedia:Peer...

strike me as being terribly incorrect — in some cases some increased concision would be good but otherwise they carry the basic facts across. Just a...

English speaker). So we'll need assurance of utmost care,precision, and concision on his part, to boot. Because what I've seen thus far is a cause for concern...

proposal. Cheers. N2e (talk) 13:47, 24 March 2020 (UTC) Keep per N2e; concision is better when shorter and longer phrases have the same meaning, but when...

Yes, it may read a bit choppy at times. It's not a question of overall concision: you can say the same thing in just as few words in much better prose...

an unconscious Spock in sickbay en route to Vulcan." - Much as I like concision, it might help to insert "was" between "direct" and "one". Also, "in which"...

editing here and have no goals on the site outside improving syntax and concision. Thanks. John Bailey Owen (talk) 16:33, 14 January 2015 (UTC) (aka Johnnydowns)...

Portions of this page are best viewed in desktop. Sometimes editors clutter their prose with pedestrian details that the reader likely already knows or...

concise at the same time; my advice is generally to err on the side of concision. I'll seek feedback through the peer review process before final polishing...

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to whether you'd prefer to sacrifice a bit of elegance for concision, or a bit of concision for elegance -- I think either solution would be fine. As the...

this-it was "in my mind" but I wasn't conscious of the need for more concision until you mentioned it. Lazulilasher (talk) 04:47, 19 April 2008 (UTC)...

nominations and awards for the cast -> Awards and nominations for the cast (concision and consistency with subsequent header) I've modified it so "awards and...

February 2017 (UTC) @Seppi333: Concision is not merely a (DON'T)LIKEIT argument. The hatnote guideline supports concision in hatnotes, for example: When...

Squids and Chips Srice13 Steel1943 Steve Strummer – I prize clarity and concision. Stijn Vermeeren Sumsum2010 - I mainly fix periods that aren't supposed...

three sentences if necessary, or five words, all depending on how much concision you want. —Simetrical (talk • contribs) 17:59, 25 October 2007 (UTC) um...

WP:WOULDCHUCK was brought in to provide --> "was sent to provide" for concision. The United States also wanted reintegration to be achieved for this end...

peak of number ninety on the US Hot R&B/Hip-Hop Songs chart." Improve concision, also note a hard space between number and ninety. Changed. Azealia911...

01:35, 29 August 2006 (UTC) I understand what you're saying, and I prefer concision where possible, but not at the expense of clarity. My experience has been...

matter of stylistic preference. Dolphin51's case rests on arguments for concision; mine on arguments for adhering to a formal tone. (And, by the way, I've...

or how the game evolved. Rephrased. Y The text could benefit from some concision. For instance, the "While he and his wife were out for dinner, waiting...

character and life experiences of Elspeth are a reflection of her own. – for concision, revise to "Isobelle Carmody has said that the character and life experiences...

with an unsourced one). Wikipedia is not paper; while we should edit for concision, we should not sacrificy accuracy in the name of brevity. There's always...

is apparently a template for that. I'm seeing a lot more in the way of concision and smoother wording that can be improved: "eateries they recommended...

that details are not lost. Other than some tweaking of the notes for concision (in ways already identified above, which isn't a significant issue IMO)...

section. General trimming and restructuring is needed overall. Lack of concision is the most critical problem. All of the FAs on books are more concise...

and treat concision primarily as a tie breaker. That is, if all other criteria don't indicate a particular title between two, then concision kicks in preferring...

19th-century scholars, and I'm sure that he's going to make efforts about the concision of his messages on talk pages. Alcaios (talk) 15:04, 23 July 2021 (UTC)...

any criteria other than concision, nor by any other consensus-supported arguments. In such cases the interpretation of concision as indicating the longer...

"format" argument is a content argument because, in the name of style and concision, you've removed uncomfortable descriptors ("fascist") from major newspapers...

additional comment. If either comment consists of a single sentence, then the concision is a virtue. -- Hoary (talk) 22:51, 3 August 2020 (UTC) @Hoary: Sorry...

length of this notice is excessive; please rephrase, aiming at greater concision. El_C 19:41, 14 April 2007 (UTC) Summarizing: dhartung and iridescenti...

to be relevant." 19:57, 13 December 2022 (UTC) "/* Demographics */ For concision. Was completely irrelevant to the city, more relevant to Edessa if anything...

wikispeak, you're not serious? The only thing useful you said was the concision, and that's hopeless for this user.--Bbb23 (talk) 00:15, 14 May 2019 (UTC)...

improvements or factors related to promotional tone (avoid repetition; concision; attribute who "some critics" are). Let me know if you have any questions...

just be ignored. Perhaps all our messages need some effort at greater concision. DGG (talk) 21:21, 1 July 2008 (UTC) Granted, I can see how having that...

just be ignored. Perhaps all our messages need some effort at greater concision. DGG (talk) 21:21, 1 July 2008 (UTC) Granted, I can see how having that...

such an extent, so you'll have to do better than that. Aim at clarity & concision. El_C 20:46, 24 March 2007 (UTC) I'm afraid proving forgeries briefly...

candidates. The titles of many lists on this page have been modified for concision. Shortcut WP:FLWP:FL v t e Featured content: Featured articles Featured...

Wikipedian. Here for example , BHG sets out both main perspectives with concision & precision, in near full compliance with WP:NOTFORUM, masking her own...

Q&A universe since I've been here. Without his tireless dedication to concision and precision in providing honest-to-God reference material, this project...

to compound steam engines, though she was a full two knots faster. for concision both pronouns and 'was' could be omitted Reworded The ship was decommissioned...

tag should not be there. Anyway, please have a look: WP:Concision razor Wikipedia talk:Concision razor Thanks! --B2C 16:15, 24 April 2014 (UTC) WP:NOESSAY...

I wonder if the two sentences could be recast for better clarity and concision. Suggestion: Of all the naturally occurring elements, X was the last to...

"the second largest municipality by population in Almería" for sake of concision and flow. Done. Alavense (talk) 19:00, 28 May 2025 (UTC) I might include...

Contains only two pages: the head article Construction grammar, and concision. Both are already well-categorised, so no need to merge. BrownHairedGirl...

on Fram's narrative of what happened (helpfully summarised with less concision here by red-tailed hawk), not what happened. As I've said above, I'd welcome...

thanks for the correction, it is, after all, better to put precision over concision  :) cheers! >SerialNumber54129...speculates 18:50, 24 December 2017 (UTC)...

process are a little too bureaucratic and the passive voice is better for concision (because the answer is "by the Secretary of State for Culture, Media and...

constructively within the gender topic area as a whole. I apologize for my lack of concision – I tried to keep this post short but I felt some explanation was necessary...

20:58, 14 October 2006 (UTC) You should explain to the user the need for concision and avoiding historically-trivial content. Otherwise, if it's still too...

advise the students to treat their editing with appropriate care and concision as to make valuable contributions to a valuable resource. With the problems...

It should really sort by release date, even if it only shows year for concision. This doesn't happen for me. Not really sure what you're saying.  — Calvin999...

claim that it's how things are for 80% of the world's population, because concision matters more than accuracy". These were not intentional choices. Nobody...

change of topic with the casting of an aspersion to close on, (such sweet concision LOL), but I'll run with it. (RHETORICAL) QUESTION: If we were to compare...

issues would relate to WP:WAF, formatting and section breakdown, the concision of the article and the lead section, but, really, any contribution would...

interesting point I had considered adding then didn’t out of concern for focus/concision. The fact that you’ve raised it makes me believe my original consideration...

2015 (UTC) I started to mention this earlier, after reverting this guy's concision,[269] except my connection timed out, and I nearly forgot. With all things...

reasonable. And if the consensus was to go with it, it was also a model of concision. The only reason I didn't comment was I had already suggested language...

to Demiurge1000 and Demiurge1000 comments above has to lead me to the concision that the edits yesterday were not an attempt to evade any block and were...

the likely participants to help us move toward some sort of resolution; concision is your friend, evidence of actual misconduct is needed, and your own...

me from doing what I do well; which is edit articles for accuracy and concision."[75] I am not sure what is going on here but 'new editor caught up in...

specialty issues and help edit articles here for accuracy, clarity and concision, I'm not indispensable. None of us are. I invite you to read...

Oppose First impression: the lead is a bit heavy duty for this article--concision is always the best policy. I don't see how the lead can be more concise...

edits, because he should be encouraged to edit his own posts to improve concision. Also, due to unclear trust in judgement of reading consensus (a very...

--BrownHairedGirl (talk) • (contribs) 00:56, 7 December 2018 (UTC) Support for concision, since only a geopolitical entity, not a geological landmass, has foreign...

blocked users but many of them seemed to be doing constructive edits (concision, cleaning up language, trimming POV material) to articles that were overseen...

episodes he has seen" - Maybe "he has seen" could be done away with for concision since it is obvious. The repetition of "Poortvliet" in three consecutive...

inability to answer my question (reposted from Recent edit thread (edited for concision): I've found the above exchange interesting. K.e.coffman (talk) 05:36...

instances of bizarre or biased edit summaries, but in the interest of concision, I'll just leave those nine for now. In general, this user adds an immense...

paragraph is a wall of text). Perhaps it would help both the coherency and concision of their arguments if they had to support every assertion they made (on...

Levivich [dubious – discuss] 16:32, 7 April 2020 (UTC) I see in attempting concision I sacrificed clarity and in so doing I inadvertently slighted the efforts...

any edits. I won't dissect the whole thing, but my proposed rewrite for concision and clarity is: Rich Farmbrough is prohibited from making any mass changes...

them should probably be along the lines of just increased clarity and concision, not expansion with new rule-making. Personally, I think almost all of...

King of Hearts, another SPI clerk, opposes the ban - and with remarkable concision. Hopefully, PhilKnight, a check user for whom I have enormous respect...

place, but he works by indiscriminate aggregation, not by conceptual concision and winnowing. Barring fresh archeological/papyric/inscriptional evidence...

Hemsworth... I'd replace "the singer" with either "Cyrus" or "her", for concision Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 22:52, 3 January 2019 (UTC) "Inspired" is a country...

regarding Senkaku, Ryukyu, etc. In addition, though still lacking in concision, his style of communication has improved dramatically since his edit ban...

with several participants to significantly trim and otherwise aim at concision. Us AE admins are not paid staff, we are volunteers like you. I submit...

additions) in a new AE, which defeats the purpose of AE having rather strict concision limits and diff-pileup constraints. It's a "cut off your nose to spite...

more words but doesn't actually clarify anything and we should emphasise concision. And they died very much in the war, not somewhere else while it was going...

22:59, 2 February 2010 (UTC) Support I like the balance of detail and concision here. I was expecting an insanely long fan-driven piece and found instead...

This is my first time opening an AE request; I apologize for my lack of concision and hope any mistakes on my part will be explained so that I can correct...

relevant to Capetillo's biography. I'd suggest trimming these a bit for concision. I think the context is relevant, so I'll keep it for now, but if it gets...

#Good_practices_for_all_talk_pages_used_for_collaboration, emphasizes concision, and the last bullet of the section on behavior that is unacceptable links...

stated: Yes, I think all articles ought to follow WP:Lead, which emphasizes concision and readability, but leaves room for an entity's multiple names by way...

2019 (UTC) Delete Merge to Ponce, Puerto Rico, with intent to edit for concision and tone. This is more fitting for WikiTravel. Even if there was some...

hatnotes, and even though this comes out of a legitimate concern for concision, it leads to a loss of clarity. As this discussion of 2016 clarified,...

the initials and surname of a notable person. Aim for a balance between concision and clarity, favoring the latter. The final element of the name is never...

fine with the extra wordiness, works for me. Otherwise I err towards concision as long as the meaning is clear. czar 06:48, 31 May 2021 (UTC) An advantage...

Authority should be corrected. There's something to be said for the greater concision, although I expect that 7 or 8 will prove better able to satisfy competing...

be used, subject to balancing recognizability, naturalness, precision, concision, and consistency, and other good things even if not documented. Parentheses...

article on WP is the conflict between precision (presenting details) and concision (economy of words) which drives the use of jargon (technical terms not...

RA+Rap-Up, Mars said that..." based on your attached sources. Though for concision, I think the former would be better. That's all from me. -- Carlobunnie...

warship." peaceful exploring of the sea perhaps 'sea exploration' for concision Rewritten, but I kept the word "peaceful" in there, to make it clear that...

I'd say that shorthand is justifiable, if sacrificing precision for concision. SamuelRiv (talk) 22:59, 1 August 2022 (UTC) I am not saying Fauci accepted...

nominations and awards for the cast -> Awards and nominations for the cast (concision and consistency with subsequent header) I've modified it so "awards and...

There is no need to engage in extensive explanations unless requested. Concision does not in any way demonstrate a lack of understanding of the process...

Confederation, so I disagree with the idea this is needed. In this case, concision outweighs precision IMHO. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 06:15, 3...

to the Pandavas", or something else. Blandness isn't necessary, though concision and informativeness are definitely virtues (and will generally result...

wakes up, maybe it's not worth mentioning that she's unconscious, for concision's sake. "Wrecks" makes me think of knocking over dishes and tearing down...

Category:Character-substitution templates Nominator's rationale: For concisions and to be consistent with almost every other such template category (Category:Character...

when necessary, since it affects thousands of people and we've found concision to be extremely important in communicating with students). Curious as...

that word and have to use several words instead. Offensive to my goal of concision. ―Mandruss ☎ IMO. 12:05, 1 April 2025 (UTC) Not really. There are plenty...

it needs a good amount of copy-editing as a whole (e.g. editing for concision and clarity). Thanks, Y2kcrazyjoker4 (talk) 20:48, 4 January 2010 (UTC)...

page and this page) is warranted over one day given the principles of concision in the naming policy. The date of his election is discussed in the prose...

kind of just fizzled out. (Looking back I really wrote too much, heh. Concision was not/is not my strong suit.) Mz7 (talk) 19:42, 21 March 2021 (UTC)...

editing here and have no goals on the site outside improving syntax and concision. Thanks. John Bailey Owen (talk) 16:33, 14 January 2015 (UTC) (aka Johnnydowns)...

excessive "Winslow"ing hasn't, as one might think, preserved clarity and concision. Take e.g. "Winslow was taught by Starbuck in Winslow's first year as...

explained my viewpoint previously and you responded, so in the interest of concision I didn't want to repeat it. Beyond my original comment, another way of...

appropriately covered at Working hours in France, for consistency and concision, with the correspondingly broader scope. Another thing to note is that...

hopes that ArbCom will designate which are acceptable? As well, your concision is appreciated, but there is no need to post word counts along with each...

been deleted", and I support the former for stylistic reasons as well as concision. Newimpartial (talk) 14:59, 25 May 2017 (UTC) Support I realize this isn't...

prejudice.) I would argue that additional stated benefits should include concision and convenience. Its articles, nor writing guidelines don't need to change...

in particular is about tabular data, which is a circumstance in which concision is valued. Given the overall meaning and intent of MOS:ABBR, the fact...

considerably. The text just doesn't feel like any effort has been put towards concision. We're working on this, but many of our editors feel that the recommendations...

shorter, and partly because: Encyclopedias are supposed to be concise. Concision is one of the key characteristics of an encyclopedia. Articles in the...

You will not find your (already fixed) complaints about the clarity, concision, spelling or grammar of the prose anywhere in my list. I have listed as...

I don't support treating captions the same as (sub-)headlines. While concision is often important when captioning (especially image captions), clickbaiting...

"moved ... to ...:" message.—Emil J. 17:34, 18 June 2010 (UTC) Yes, but concision is relative, and truncating to shorter than the field length provided...

size issues may be indicative of genuine GA problems with coverage (3a), concision and focus (1a and 3b), or the use of summary style. Mistakes to avoid...

about three columns of text that's already expressed with Fowleresque concision, but I can describe it. It starts off by examining "had had", then "do...

do with bias and not with, say, Britannica articles being edited for concision. -- BenRG (talk) 21:39, 18 January 2015 (UTC) See Wikipedia:Systemic bias...

"Characters", "Setting", or of the intricate details of "Gameplay". I aim for concision and brevity in my description of in-universe material, writing only as...

others may think it should be written at a grade 8 level, for greater concision. Neither groups are wrong; they just have different goals.) That being...

certainly aren't, and are routinely browbeaten by editors to aim for as much concision as possible even at the expense of clarity (American headlines are notorious...

Ⓜ️hawk10 (talk) 02:25, 17 May 2022 (UTC) Support, with no objection to concision or other wording tweaks suggested. Wikipedia articles should help readers...

that discuss Torres' views and the Response section when merging for concision. Ideally we'd get it down to one long paragraph and retain the most reputable...

sexuality and not gender. The benefit to the renaming seems to be concision, but concision outside of the actual bodies of articles is not a major concern...

Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 11:58, 5 August 2012 (UTC) Needs improvement on concision and removal of trivia facts. C class. DragonZero (Talk · Contribs) 12:13...

network, local police and fire fighting." ==> recommend rewording for tone/concision (better sentence?: "Municipalities have a large degree of autonomy in...

Clio the Muse 00:27, 21 August 2007 (UTC) Another model of balance and concision! I note how Clio makes each word count.--Wetman 00:43, 21 August 2007...

prepositional phrases or whatnots that need to follow it - I'm looking for concision. Thanks! Kayau Voting IS evil 15:54, 5 April 2011 (UTC) Surpass, outdo...

2013 Jordanian elections, and for which the new template lacks the same concision and context. I'm going to look into the Jordan templates, and at least...

keep, following CuriousGolden who said what I would have but with more concision. :-)  — SMcCandlish ☏ ¢ 😼  04:43, 21 November 2021 (UTC) Keep in the...

like "when the FFIS canceled the event due to the COVID-19 pandemic" for concision  Done I shortened it even further than that. There are WP:SANDWICHING...

way, so I guess either way is a small trade-off. Clarity is better than concision, though. Awadewit (talk) 02:10, 9 May 2009 (UTC) "Over time, they develop...

Observation. Previous RfD examples Yogurt Principle, Yogurt Rule, and Concision razor were all deleted under the same principle - that "Wikipedia:" redirects...

better without the "with" – the absolute construction has the benefit of concision. Well spotted. Done. Each of the three paras of this section has a clutch...

redirect). Everything that is said in this article can be said with greater concision in the existing section without any loss in fidelity. That Popinski was...

a section I switch to the last name after the first use. Part of the concision thing. You're switching back and forth between full name and last name...

in this RfA. That is clear. And I blew the opportunity to demonstrate concision in areas where brevity was more appropriate. So indeed, I intend to change...

Generally, comments on talk pages aren't as stringently tested for accuracy, concision and brevity as article text in Wikipedia. There are occasionally editors...

like Risk analysis, I would recommend the shorter title Risks, both for concision and because the probability-related articles declared to be within scope...

that "e-mailed poem written by a total amateur" was admirable in its concision. Cyrusc (talk) 23:38, 16 December 2007 (UTC) In studying the military...

formality of the register. News headlines will often omit particles for concision, academic writing will dip into the older genitives like 之 and 其. If things...

reader in situ (I know this is difficult: it stretches one's powers of concision to the limits and requires all sorts of editing judgements about how much...

race as a response to the COVID-19 pandemic -- > "race due to the" for concision Are you sure? I'm never keen on "due to" and I'm never certain when it's...

17:19, 5 April 2007 (UTC) Support For reasons relative to clarity and concision that have been well set forth by others and need not to be recapitulated...

tuned with pure fifths (3:2) and pure major thirds (5:4). For the sake of concision, I'll describe the degrees with their values in cent, but your could check...

The titling of this template is very bad. It needs both clarity and concision. Doug Mehus T·C 21:54, 17 November 2019 (UTC) The above discussion is...

wakes up, maybe it's not worth mentioning that she's unconscious, for concision's sake. "Wrecks" makes me think of knocking over dishes and tearing down...

sentence around a different idea. Anyway, I feel this prose could use more concision for better flow. It's very long, so would you like to give it a try? I...

Ucucha 17:57, 3 June 2010 (UTC) "United States" isn't an adjective. If concision is a concern, drop "based" from the name, as I don't know that the word...

nature to exist as per the guidelines, surely we need be focusing on the concision and not the existence -c 76.48.204.53 07:36, 3 July 2007 (UTC) The exception...

the Turkana Boy, and the australopithecine Paranthropus robustus" for concision and flow? There is also a local excess of parentheticals. done Dunkleosteus77...

long, and it expands one's knowledge. However, clarity, precision and concision matters. But it can be achieved even with some Latin words. Ave, Cenarium...

a Gillingham shirt" -> "after just 14 appearances for Gillingham" for concision All I got. Smooth work. ~ HAL333 16:34, 27 July 2025 (UTC) @HAL333: -...

guideline, but IMO that will require a serious re-write for cohesion and concision, which I haven't made time for. WhatamIdoing (talk) 16:32, 22 March 2019...

re-copyedit those sections. There's always a difficult balance between concision and understandability in this type of article, of how to explain the concepts...

orangesclub 🍊 21:33, 30 June 2025 (UTC) Completely optional but for concision, you could turn the footnote "A restaurant that is not starred can still...

incorporate out-of-universe language". I believe Arrowsmith decided for concision not to use out-of-universe language (like "The Fauni, who was said in...

financial district". I'd recommend going over the article again in regards to concision. It's not too long for me, but do I have to know that, for example, W...

but merge the entire contents, though possibly rewrite for clarity on concision of expression. The continuity between the episodes can be best shown in...

WP:MUSICBIO #1, 4, 9 & 11. The article does need to be edited for clarity, concision and neutral tone.shaidar cuebiyar (talk) 04:20, 10 August 2017 (UTC) Relisted...

that you hopeably do so too. linked pages {{User:FormalDude/Userboxes/Concision}} This editor values concise writing. linked pages {{User:Mzk1/Userboxes/Lost...

least twice. I suggest you go through and copy-edit it with an eye for concision, summary style, and a focus on the family/genus/species. --SilverTiger12...

several sections could benefit from light trimming to improve rhythm and concision. The tone is appropriately neutral, and the inclusion of development context...

[5] and Kadish finished the demo..." (removing repetition of "Kadish"). Concision: "Although both were satisfied with the song"? Could probably link record...

reporting results. Since it's a speech, there's a different trade-off between concision and precision. The behavioral subtyping article, in contrast, appeared...

AR's comments above. With that said the article could use some edits for concision in regards to length and certain details; for example, I had taken out...

article about some claimed business method. This similarly seems to lack concision and clarity. - Smerdis of Tlön (talk) 14:07, 22 April 2008 (UTC) Keep...

idiomatic usage? What would be the correct way to say this, preserving the concision of the English "Next!" which "Le prochain client, s'il vous plait!", while...

that details are not lost. Other than some tweaking of the notes for concision (in ways already identified above, which isn't a significant issue IMO)...

few about the prose. I've made a few changes to the prose already for concision, but you are free to revert them. Prose: Generally communicates gameplay...

in lengthening the name to "Killing/Culling of" and so, as a lover of concision, I oppose that. --Anthonyhcole (talk · contribs · email) 05:52, 15 February...

out duplicate categories, but I think that it is still worth moving for concision. Categories pile up at the bottom of articles, and the less clutter the...

‎ The result was no consensus. Sandstein 06:38, 13 October 2021 (UTC) Concision (media studies) (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch |...

August 2008 (UTC) Keep - However, it needs to be shortened for greater concision and be thoroughly cleaned up and copyedited. Also brings up an interesting...

(including that debacle that used to be at MOS:REGISTER, and several "concision is #1!" attempts someone made a year or so ago to undermine WP:AT policy)...

It should really sort by release date, even if it only shows year for concision. This doesn't happen for me. Not really sure what you're saying.  — Calvin999...

incorporate out-of-universe language". I believe Arrowsmith decided for concision not to use out-of-universe language (like "The Fauni, who was said in...

noted that explaining in detail everything would dull the focus and hurt concision. On Bloxham: I couldn't see Gaunt's source, but if that's what he writes...

convention for this article, but I think it checks all the boxes in terms of concision and what it is being commonly referred to. I do think a couple paragraphs...

ones that come to mind for me are the Yogurt Rule/Yogurt Principle and Concision razor cases, all of which had pretty strong consensus to delete. --BDD...

one exists. AtticusX (talk) 04:24, 10 November 2015 (UTC) [edited for concision] Note: This debate has been included in the list of Language-related deletion...

cutting "also referred to as the champion or the redeemed warrior" for concision; it doesn't seem to be referred to subsequently. Cut. In the actual graphic...

about three columns of text that's already expressed with Fowleresque concision, but I can describe it. It starts off by examining "had had", then "do...

2025 (UTC) Concision is definitely one of the main pillars of Wikipedia writing, but I think you misunderstand the difference between "concision" and "terseness"...

reason why any salvageable material can't be dealt with (with appropriate concision) as part of the parent article.- Simon Dodd { U·T·C·WP:LAW } 17:01, 4...

--BDD (talk) 16:35, 18 April 2014 (UTC) Conciseness razor → Wikipedia:Concision razor (links to redirect • history • stats)     [ Closure: keep/delete ] ...

March 2024 (UTC) More Do some trims to the following words or phrases for concision "both" from "both he and Combs" and "both Carey and her fans" (this word...

identifies the article's subject and distinguishes it from other subjects. Concision – The title is not longer than necessary to identify the article's subject...

the merged list at Tales of Graces. Don't I deserve some faith that my concision/merge is an improvement? DragonZero (Talk · Contribs) 12:54, 9 December...

same thing? (recommend taking out at-large if possible or rewording for concision) 1912–1943: 1 seat, 1943–1963: 2 seats, 1963–1973: 3 seats, 1973–1983:...

plot summaries are unsuitable, at least they have the inherent virtue of concision. Compare this monstrosity. One sample: It can also be utilized in conjuncture...

2019 (UTC) Delete Merge to Ponce, Puerto Rico, with intent to edit for concision and tone. This is more fitting for WikiTravel. Even if there was some...

Ingratis (talk) 18:10, 27 March 2022 (UTC) What your comment lacks in concision it also lacks in accuracy. The suggested target articles contains no coverage...

mi) at a speed of 18 knots (33 km/h; 21 mph) - Suggest rewriting for concision to split the clauses about top speed into their own sentence following...

particular issue. BHG presents a lot of facts, and does so with good concision. Concise does not mean brief. —SmokeyJoe (talk) 11:58, 12 January 2020...

as a source. You can look at the evidence yourself and draw your own concision. You aren't fooling anyone, you know. We have all figured out what you...

situation. Granted, this article needs very much work in regards to its concision in the least. Narcissus 07:58, 13 May 2006 (UTC) Strong keep Censorship...

James F. (talk) 14:52, 11 July 2007 (UTC) (Slight wording change for concision). Blnguyen (bananabucket) 07:39, 13 July 2007 (UTC) The Uninvited Co....

abbreviate the baserunners as either "1st/1B, 2nd/2B, or 3rd/3B" for concision. However, the "result of play" column doesn't need to be abbreviated as...

23:17, 10 April 2020 (UTC) Oppose this isn’t a journalism piece where concision in design is key. This causes no harm, and I actually think helps with...

read them and digested them. There's a lot of them, and you'll find that concision is normally a virtue (do as I say, not as I do, here!), but I for one...

reasonably evaluate the arguments which were based on WP:CRITERIA and WP:CONCISION with due consideration Assigned weights to the support arguments with...

and the consensus we have built has promoted a vast improvement in the concision and the aesthetics of these subject areas and others, such at the NFL...

siafu I prefer the form Category:Paintings by Vermeer, for the sake of concision and grammatical sense. (I would prefer a short form of the artist's name...

redirect). Everything that is said in this article can be said with greater concision in the existing section without any loss in fidelity. That Popinski was...

I've tweaked it but I don't love the new version either (I was going for concision in the lead) so open to further tweaking. How about working up from the...

castles were constructed from timber..." is, I think, more the level of concision that FAC tends to demand. In the 4th para of that section, ...Cheshire...

BigzMMA (talk) 10:29, 8 December 2011 (UTC) How do you come to that concision, what coverage exists is just routine of a sporting event, nether the...

hand as those by Jinglyjangle. The style, effectiveness and level of concision are poles apart. I only skimmed the TLDR screeds but their contribution...

convention for this article, but I think it checks all the boxes in terms of concision and what it is being commonly referred to. I do think a couple paragraphs...

the same place (as with WP:NOTABLE and WP:NOTABILITY; WP:CONCISE and WP:CONCISION; WP:VERIFIABLE and WP:VERIFIABILITY. Cons: the page for WP:IMPORTANT is...

initial reading it seems more like a case of copyediting for clarity and concision. Leave it with me and I will think about it. --John (talk) 17:30, 4 October...

survive, it needs to be renamed to James Herndon (psychologist), for WP:CONCISION. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Xurizuri (talk • contribs) 03:14...

named, so I don't agree that this content should be deleted. Edited for concision, on the other hand, yes. --Arxiloxos (talk) 00:05, 8 March 2012 (UTC)...

small-ball connoisseurs). The introduction of the term safe has been recast—concision and the existing structure of the Rules and gameplay section have been...

America1000 00:46, 13 November 2021 (UTC) Annalee Skarin – needs significant concision. KidAd talk 03:00, 5 February 2021 (UTC)  Done – Struck the above entry...

size issues may be indicative of genuine GA problems with coverage (3a), concision and focus (1a and 3b), or the use of summary style. Mistakes to avoid...

siafu I prefer the form Category:Paintings by Vermeer, for the sake of concision and grammatical sense. (I would prefer a short form of the artist's name...

about Macedonian topics/entities etc., for the sake of simplicity and concision. But if we can't agree on some reasonable approach to what "depending...

appropriate. Done. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 22:48, 4 July 2023 (UTC) For concision's sake: "as the instructor of piano" --> "as the piano instructor". Done...

editing here and have no goals on the site outside improving syntax and concision. Thanks. John Bailey Owen (talk) 16:33, 14 January 2015 (UTC) (aka Johnnydowns)...

bloated. --MelanieN (talk) 23:48, 31 August 2018 (UTC) Keep: could use some concision, but this is a valid topic and stand-alone article is appropriate. K.e...

talk:Primary sources tool), and elsewhere. I like the playfulness and concision of the tool. There have been some discussions about that kind of features...

state" linked to the rump state article, not the N. Yuan article. I know concision is important in tables, but I'd say it's worth writing "the Northern Yuan...

theater isn't protected speech either. +Angr 16:03, 26 May 2009 (UTC) For concision, I didn't want to discuss libel or shouting fire, so I said "insult"....

Communist Party committee secretaries of Xi'an Comment @Good Olfactory: for concision I would suggest Category:Communist Party secretaries of Foo for local-level...

government in Malé" and delete last sentence in the paragraph (for flow+concision) Those are rather minor changes, and I'll preemptively support as you...

classificatory criterion for these writers. Apologies for my lack of concision. Wareh (talk) 03:03, 11 March 2009 (UTC) Keep per Wareh, or Rename to...

really not sure what the best name would be, in terms of clarity and concision, so I'm leaving that open to suggestion. Notified creator with {{subst:cfd-notify}}...

08:51, 16 July 2007 (UTC) A short list of grievances addressing issues of concision, personal experience, the expressed desire on the part of arbitrators...

of discouraging silly outsiders, also has advantages of precision and concision. But we're an encyclopedia, not a texbook for students of phonetics or...

disambiguation () Wikipedia:Miscellany for deletion/Wikipedia:Concision razor (userfy) Wikipedia:Miscellany for deletion/Wikipedia talk:Articles...

could introduce more variation, but am still concerned we'd be losing concision and flow as a result. OK, we can agree to disagree on this. Spicy (talk)...

editing here and have no goals on the site outside improving syntax and concision. Thanks. John Bailey Owen (talk) 16:33, 14 January 2015 (UTC) (aka Johnnydowns)...

there are places where it could be tightened. A thorough copy edit for concision could probably cull a couple of hundred words without any loss of meaning...

in the visible captions that these are satellite images, probably for concision's sake; see Tropical Storm Hernan (2020), the most recently promoted tropical...

apologise for the lengthy reply but know not of another way when efforts at concision have failed, having been tried. Please follow-on, if questions remain...

00:03, 13 July 2007 (UTC) I made many small changes meant to improve concision and clarity. I added a couple of wiki links for automotive terms such...

something he considered so lacklustre. Could be reworked for clarity and concision. It's all good as it is. - SchroCat (talk) 12:02, 26 December 2024 (UTC)...

that combining the sentence in question with the next one improves the concision. isaacl (talk) 04:52, 12 January 2015 (UTC) Are we in enough agreement...

of use of HC over HRC doesn't justify this supervote. I agree that, on concision and common name, HC beats HRC. But titling policy is not the only policy...

20 August 2022 (UTC)  Done; probably should've copyedited earlier for concision and ease of reading, but it is what it is. 74.73.224.126 (talk) 06:09...

fruit all year round. try your best to merge this into one sentence for concision. Changed to "Some perennials offer harvests all year round, including...

"Palestine" is the only term that's at all suggestive and applicable with any concision appropriate for a template name, but there's ample scope for squabbling...

22 November 2022 (UTC) Addressed both, having trimmed the sentence for concision. I believe all of your comments above have been addressed, @FrB.TG. Feel...

advertised RfC. [145] That is, I'm trying to put coherence, rigor and concision into the argument against present image use here. I believe that if interested...

dehydrated food is somewhat confusing. Did Stafford accidentally do this? For concision you could also just use "reconstituted". Also passive voice. Yes, the...

2022 (UTC) Thank you; I originally had both yours and WP:3REFS, but for concision I shortened it to just yours, as the more influential essay in establishing...

thorough copyediting to address issues with clarity, flow, cohesion, concision, and repetition; and make sure the intended meaning in some parts was...

who took the effort to condense their opninions to something readable. Concision is important. If Rhoark wanted more detailed, comprehensive feedback,...

Yes, it may read a bit choppy at times. It's not a question of overall concision: you can say the same thing in just as few words in much better prose...

08:02, 1 September 2016 (UTC) PS: I also like that the candidate is not a concision fanatic. >;-) PPS: I could quibble with some aspects of the answer to...

bits (about moving content to other articles) omitted for the sake of concision. WhatamIdoing (talk) 14:56, 11 May 2020 (UTC) Tryptofish, I'm using may...

cordoned off While it would be trivial to source this, I try to aim for concision in the lead so removed. FN8: there are several other authors listed at...

(UTC) Could you maybe drop "many" from many policymaking committees for concision? Just saying faculty and students sit on policymaking committees might...

can link to a longer statement in their userspace. In communication, concision is important. —SmokeyJoe (talk) 02:19, 17 December 2018 (UTC) I'm not...

that requires expansion, rather than serving as a model of such terse concision that, for example, my paraphrase of the 2019 paper, a mere three lines...

read them and digested them. There's a lot of them, and you'll find that concision is normally a virtue (do as I say, not as I do, here!), but I for one...

"that the chronology of the work" --> that the work's chronology" for concision "the historian Paul Ratchnevsky notes that Temüjin himself may not have...

in lengthening the name to "Killing/Culling of" and so, as a lover of concision, I oppose that. --Anthonyhcole (talk · contribs · email) 05:52, 15 February...

who prefer concision. Rosbif73 (talk) 14:20, 27 June 2024 (UTC) It might be clarifying if you could explain whether you prefer concision in cases like...

elaboration is required? Sometimes brevity is a virtue also known as concision. --Gaff (talk) 03:10, 2 March 2015 (UTC) I share the concerns of many...

December 2012 (UTC) Assessed. Some points could be rewritten to improve concision and to remove slang. DragonZero (Talk · Contribs) 02:00, 6 January 2013...

- This paragraph seems a bit wordy or repetitive. Agreed. Edited for concision. – Scartol • Tok 16:04, 1 June 2008 (UTC) In other instances she allowed...

settlement Nominator's rationale: Precision ("clan village" is repetitive) and concision (many Korean clans are not from villages, but from cities. "Settlement"...

list above. There are problems with the writing -- mostly with a lack of concision, but occasionally more than that. The worst issue is the overuse of quotes...

is involved in. I will adjust these accordingly, as in my pursuit of concision, I appear to have rendered some harsh proposals. Fritzpoll (talk) 15:49...

novel. In answer to your question, both summary and synopsis intimate concision and overview – for our purposes, we should view the two terms as overlaping...

This is an excellent article, and I'm particularly impressed by its concision and readability, which make it very accessible. I think there's scope...

physical film of that story titled Gone With the Wind." Then, through concision, one might simply say "I saw the film Gone With the Wind." Now, if we...

of Marche, and List of railway stations in the Marche. Precision and concision don't seem to differ much in between the three. This leads me to suggest...

that. In my opinion, if the editor is writing with reasonable care and concision, they ought to have space to speak their peace. To what extent should...

admin assess the consensus at Wikipedia:Miscellany for deletion/Wikipedia:Concision razor (initiated 18 August 2014)? Thanks, Cunard (talk) 03:16, 1 September...

interpretation, both of which emphasize the importance of clarity and concision. I've written and revised bylaws for non-profits, and in the latter case...

08:05, 27 July 2016 (UTC) * "the latter of which being an act called" – concision here Fixed. ~ Dissident93 (talk) 23:06, 20 July 2016 (UTC) Dateline in...

(UTC) Image review Cheery-bomb caption could use a bit of tweaking for concision and phrasing File:Old_American_Cherry_Bombs_Cherry-bombs.png: I'm not...

to Category:Korean clans of Vietnamese origin Nominator's rationale: Concision; no need to specify "names" toobigtokale (talk) 08:42, 2 August 2023 (UTC)...

the comparisons to Star Control II – while still erring on the side of concision. Thanks for the thorough review and hopefully that addresses your comments...

detail on distinctions it's going to affect the general readability and concision of people looking for info about Irataba. It's already padded enough as...

after revisions made the page even more of a mess (see Wikipedia talk:Concision razor#A fresh look).  — SMcCandlish ☺ ☏ ¢ ≽ʌⱷ҅ᴥⱷʌ≼  02:40, 18 July 2014...

made that restructure, or completely remove sentences, this improves the concision of the article. The links and citations tested are up to date and relevant...

the header is "biased", and "bias," (as opposed to concerns regarding concision or descriptive rigor or something less inflammatory like that) is the...

yourself against claims. I've merged the separate reports together for concision. In progress. Mz7 (talk) 22:18, 10 March 2021 (UTC) Confirmed plus the...

actually reduce it to something like "around 90 days of the year" for concision? "upon the King in Northampton, upon royal summons" – two upons in close...

Pepper 15:14, 23 September 2007 (UTC) I don't think his answer lacked concision. It was fact-dense and answered the question fully. --Sean 14:34, 24 September...

(UTC) Perhaps. I think the relevant policy here is WP:CONCISION: specifically The goal of concision is to balance brevity with sufficient information to...

prioritization of paper length and grader overwhelm over clarity and concision. In this way, the EP can be an extension of what we should want for all...

wants to read all the detail of the main body and thus, the former's concision is an advantage. One final point: I see The Oceanides as a middle-of-the-pack...

concision) Changed. -Bryan Rutherford (talk) 19:54, 2 January 2020 (UTC) "...Austria conceded to Prussia the large majority of Silesia..." (concision...

nature to exist as per the guidelines, surely we need be focusing on the concision and not the existence -c 76.48.204.53 07:36, 3 July 2007 (UTC) The exception...

00:07, 21 January 2023 (UTC) began sending surface runoff → sent for concision, though I'd prefer a better verb (not sure rainwater "sends" anything)...

improves with language efficiency and "information density"; that's why concision is important and verbosity is usually a hindrance to communication (see...

call it a day. HouseBlaster (talk • he/they) 03:29, 17 March 2026 (UTC) Concision matters less than precision; so far as we know, the topic is not in fact...

good writing style would be to remove superfluous words in the name of concision. It's especially unneeded here because nobody ever translates the Spanish...

equivalent of the RSPB? Also, you may wish to look at these hints on concision. BrainyBabe (talk) 10:23, 31 March 2010 (UTC) How come there are no articles...

verbosity/walls of text to slog through, I thought it was obvious that concision is very important. I actually read of what you wrote, so let me respond...

cut-and-dried prohibition as to the length of a plot summary/synopsis, concision is important and unnecessary detail should be eliminated. The current...

--Mirokado (talk) 07:13, 2 January 2015 (UTC) The operative word is concision. The sources will need a revisit and then a decision in regards to the...

removing a WP:BLP/WP:V violation has priority over HAL333's argument for concision. HAL333 then edited in this third version omitting the word "factory":[54]...

probably trim a few hundred words. I made a handful of copy edits for concision; you could probably use those as a guide to make more as you go through...

of my "Onan" remark. Now it's Jack's turn to pick on me for my lack of concision and focus. :) Loomis 22:33, 10 October 2006 (UTC) Hi everyone. Thank you...

with Awadewit in general that chronology is the way to go. I think if concision is really what is needed (and if there's no other way to do it), restructuring...

inaccurate. It's a bit of an oversimplification, but for the sake of concision in the lead. Saying "a pair of stained-glass windows by Archibald Keightley...

identifies the article's subject and distinguishes it from other subjects, and Concision – The title is no longer than necessary to identify the article's subject...

Coates... Coates could be described as "the linguist" here for clarity and concision. Done. -G That's all from my end Generalissima. MSincccc (talk) 17:42...

describes itself as The goal of these pages is not to be a model of concision, maximizing entertainment value per word, or to preach to a choir by elegantly...

with "until 1920[,] when the Southern League Division One" comments re. concision "and went on to gain" it already is clear that the sentence presents a...

Susanna!” — if De Quincey will forgive the appropriation — the drive for concision seems to have sacrificed precision here.--Xover 10:51, 11 August 2007...

not very good at concision. Tlhslobus (talk) 13:28, 11 November 2021 (UTC) But we're impressed with your use of the word "concision." – Sca (talk) 13:39...

stylistic rewriting, whereby I so change correct writing as improve its concision and readability. I thus encounter several problems: 1 I sometimes see...

requires article names to be as as concise as possible, saying "The goal of concision is to balance brevity with sufficient information to identify the topic...

bring back the term "Internet leak", since ChrisO said he was going for concision, and it's shorter than "publication on the Internet" by a margin of about...

this could probably convey the same point without "simply" for added concision! Fixed. - G Apologies for again raising a point I had touched on earlier...

one place. Tlhslobus (talk) 22:05, 18 June 2013 (UTC) (For the sake of concision on the errors page, the above 2 postings by me in reply to Modest Genius...

me to block only if they are identical? If they are similar? I admire concision, but you need to spell out what you want even if it takes several sentences...

the more concise "from 1944 until its 1952 decommissioning" Again for concision: "Since that time, the island has remained uninhabited" --> "The island...

01:35, 29 August 2006 (UTC) I understand what you're saying, and I prefer concision where possible, but not at the expense of clarity. My experience has been...

because all movies taken together do form a notable unity. For the sake of concision, I'll leave that discussion aside for the moment. But I'll grant that:...

importance, and with the history, of Manchester, though I would encourage concision wherever possible. For example: consider whether the air subsection is...

Brigade Piron (talk) 22:48, 26 February 2014 (UTC) I normally support concision, but I think the fact they were attacked at night is a notable part of...

articles, and when she disagrees with others she does it with grace and concision. Tim riley (talk) 15:05, 1 June 2013 (UTC) Not done. Thread opened yesterday...

section. General trimming and restructuring is needed overall. Lack of concision is the most critical problem. All of the FAs on books are more concise...

(UTC) Reason: i'd like to drop my (real) last name for privacy's sake and concision - i'm not terribly concerned or anything, but i just think it would give...

it'll be at the cost of concision. ~ HAL333 22:14, 16 December 2025 (UTC) This would indeed come at the expense of concision; however, it may be an important...

"the world's most successful association football team". In fact, for concision, the bit about it's main creditor being HMRC is probably unnecessary....

quality criterion, and editing such as Indopug's for flow, focus, and concision is exactly what's called for.—DCGeist (talk) 00:31, 15 July 2010 (UTC)...

Genghis Khan's daughters,... Dropped the "which" before "described" for concision. It's unnecessary. No, it introduces a subordinate clause. The main verb...

present the case for and against the tendentious claim with clarity, concision and credibility than this chaotic string of accusations and petty squabbles...

a couple more. — Bilorv (talk) 21:58, 15 November 2021 (UTC) Room for concision: "The New Republic's John Gray argued that before the economic crisis...

describe the problem(s) on the article's talk page. Thirdly, remember that concision is a virtue. -- Hoary (talk) 22:39, 26 April 2021 (UTC) Hoary Firstly...

legal details,... Done. ...,who was appointed Minister of State. Nice concision. Ratchnevsky suggests that the Secret History, seeking to demonstrate...

12:14, 4 July 2010 (UTC) That was me, and it was done in the pursuit of concision. I've restored the clearer phrasing.—DCGeist (talk) 15:33, 4 July 2010...

but I rejected outright one of the "oppose" !votes citing WP:CONCISE - concision is never used as a reason to use a less-common name over a more-common...

worry, TRM is used to my nitpicking) but most are simple suggestions for concision. Without access to Finch, I've had to guess some things so ask for clarity...

Slash 04:06, 4 February 2021 (UTC) Endorse. Excellent improvement on concision, and all agreed. --SmokeyJoe (talk) 04:35, 4 February 2021 (UTC) @SmokeyJoe:...

the body (with the rare exception of things that are WP:BLUE), and the concision achieved in removing one word is hardly earth-shattering when the article...

readability Both done. —Vami Change to "allegedly being mismanaged" for concision and parallelism Done. —Vami Link schizophrenia Done. —Vami "John Carmack...

raions when talking about the 2014-2015 occupation: its mostly done out of concision than any actual connection between the two (technically, the new raions'...

.. --Nickkuvaas (talk) 01:17, 15 January 2015 (UTC) What I liked ... concision, interactive tutorial. What I didn't like ...I couldn't get the firework...

mention that: 0) Apologies for the lengthy wall of text, but in this case concision seems to be the enemy of verifiability, plus it's a lot shorter if you...

plot summaries are unsuitable, at least they have the inherent virtue of concision. Compare this monstrosity. One sample: It can also be utilized in conjuncture...

(and subsequently reverted in a wholesale manner) were improvements in concision and reduction in the length of an otherwise unreadable article. The talk...

what they are reading. Especially for jargon-heavy science articles. Concision is a virtue, so stay focused on the point of the sentence and paragraph...

(contribs) 12:17, 24 May 2024 (UTC) I've made several edits throughout for concision and grammar/style. Please feel free to discuss them here. At this time...

topic is just inflated and overwritten. The real art of editing is one of concision and brevity. Iskandar323 (talk) 14:48, 10 December 2023 (UTC) As an argument...

arguments longer than one word. --Merlinme (talk) 06:23, 17 April 2013 (UTC) Concision. Nomoskedasticity (talk) 06:29, 17 April 2013 (UTC) Thank you for another...

"Palestine" is the only term that's at all suggestive and applicable with any concision appropriate for a template name, but there's ample scope for squabbling...

was: 'she was a bitch'; hardly encyclopaedic much though I admire the concision) 20:24, 23 Feb 2004 Warofdreams deleted "Urban guerrilla" (content was:...

"itinerant-in-training"? Ah yeah. - G "Setting out on his own later in 1776," — concision: "Setting out alone later that year," Fix made. - G "including waking...

considerably. The text just doesn't feel like any effort has been put towards concision. We're working on this, but many of our editors feel that the recommendations...

There is no need to engage in extensive explanations unless requested. Concision does not in any way demonstrate a lack of understanding of the process...

weren't cited directly. Several other !votes appealed to the principle of concision, without the direct policy reference. TonyBallioni (talk) 18:11, 13 March...

Most of the other changes involved copyedits for style, clarity, and concision, fixing a few factual errors, adding some sources, removing or summarizing...

evidence." Sure, that could go in the main article, but for this article concision would be appropriate. Paul B (talk) 17:53, 7 July 2015 (UTC) @Paul Barlow:...

did not, however, found FW to have been exhibiting the same efforts at concision, topicality and clarity. I challenge that this is evident in each one...

that. In my opinion, if the editor is writing with reasonable care and concision, they ought to have space to speak their peace. To what extent should...

have noticed from this summary, I don't sacrifice detail in the name of concision. Regards, cab (call) 16:05, 9 October 2011 (UTC) Sorry, I don't follow...

2016 (UTC) I agree with K.e. that the article could use some edits for concision, but must say, with an obtuse post like yours I don't need to write anymore...

small-ball connoisseurs). The introduction of the term safe has been recast—concision and the existing structure of the Rules and gameplay section have been...

I can't believe you have nothing on this. I'm not a writer so you need to recruit one and investigate and include this topic. — Preceding unsigned comment...

comprehensive context and analysis with the requisites of brevity and concision. It was a pleasure to help out with it. – Scartol · Talk 12:11, 19 September...

of Norma Rowe, who is SZA's..." Fair, but I'd leave out "who is" for concisions Like Scott, Rowe's vocals prominently featured in Ctrl; - add "are" before...

22 November 2022 (UTC) Addressed both, having trimmed the sentence for concision. I believe all of your comments above have been addressed, @FrB.TG. Feel...

of importance. To that end, I intend to pick out a section and do a "concision review", with the aim of forming a judgement on these questions. UndercoverClassicist...

re-copyedit those sections. There's always a difficult balance between concision and understandability in this type of article, of how to explain the concepts...

recognizable and natural than the "-language" format of Option B. It wins on concision, sure. But for these categories, I find Option B makes the intersection...

remove the preceding comma? i.e., "Philippe Levillain stated that "[t]he concision of ...". Otherwise, the capital T sticks out like a sore thumb (per MOS:CONFORM:...

plot summaries are unsuitable, at least they have the inherent virtue of concision. Compare this monstrosity. One sample: It can also be utilized in conjuncture...

Some comments: I've done a copy edit for some minor grammar things and concision that I don't believe are objectionable, instead of listing everything...

users (an improved welcome message?) Suggestions Could use copyedit for concision Needs update for VisualEditor "sandbox edits for new articles": I think...

full to address some minor issues in the prose - primarily cohesion, concision, flow, redundancy, and clarity. Nothing about the content has been changed...

would stalk tigers on foot --> "where he stalked tigers on foot" for concision hunting in the Rocky Mountains in the US and in India, where he would...

Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 18:19, 16 June 2025 (UTC) In the pursuit of concision, either "what was" and "seen up to that date" in in what was the largest...

don't begrudge the wordiness on complex closeness, but do agree that concision is helpful. ~ Amory (u • t • c) 11:14, 5 March 2020 (UTC) Oppose - regretfully...

unbranded" --> "Many insulin analogues are available unbranded" for WP:CONCISION This list may require a visit to the WP:GOCE. ~ HAL333 18:40, 17 May 2025...

election There are various schools of thought on the proper level of concision, but I think the current text is too concise, and will lead to readers...

Concision – The title is not longer than necessary to identify the article's subject and distinguish it from other subjects. Based on the "Concision"...

initial reading it seems more like a case of copyediting for clarity and concision. Leave it with me and I will think about it. --John (talk) 17:30, 4 October...