• Following Wikipedia comments edit the entire paper so it reads more like an encyclopedia article and less like an essay

• Add more references (and notes) which may textbooks and online scholarly articles

• Edit paragraph prior to the introduction

• Improve organization of entire article

• Use sample numbers in equations and not written paragraphs

• Improve/reconsider all figures in the article

Introduction

• Correct reference to financial bank
• Determine more appropriate words to link
• Provide more information about the specific problem
• Link to Manning coefficient not Gauckler-Manning coefficient

Determining the discharge to a steep reach

• Include link to steep reach and definition early in section
• Clarify second paragraph
• Remove link to Goal Seek
• Eliminate repetition of steep reach definition

Determining the discharge of a mild reach

• Include definition or link to mild reach
• Remove detailed instructions of how to solve for variable: Goal seek, trail and error, etc.

Table 1. Normal depth iterations to balance energy for a slope of 0.004

• Consider removing or modifying table

Table 2. Normal depth iterations to balance energy for a slope of 0.0005

• Consider removing or modifying table
• Both Table 1 and Table 2 are not necessary - very repetitive

Relationship between discharge and channel mildness

• Improve flowchart

Table 3. Slope and discharge relationship

• Improve table, unclear how values are calculated

New Section - To be determined

• Meet with Dr. Moglen after class 10/1 to discuss topic