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(pirate), Henry Jennings, François l'Olonnais, Olivier Levasseur, Edward Davis (buccaneer) Copyedit: Golden Age of Piracy Images: MV Delight, MV Powerful,...

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placing a request at GOCE for copyedit right now. Regards. Santoshdts [TalkToMe] 09:38, 23 June 2020 (UTC) ​​ Copyedit is  Done; one bare URL remains...

facts cited. Article: History section has an unsourced sentence. Needs a copyedit. Reference style needs cleanup. New enough, long enough. No images, so...

Copy Editors reviews an article for which a copyedit has been requested, but determines that a copyedit is not appropriate due to the need for further...

Article: This needs a good copyedit. New and long enough. Referenced thoroughly. AGF on offline sources. Summary: Needs a copyedit and clarification of the...

article has a copyedit template on it; the article cannot be approved until a copyedit has been completed. Putting this on hold until a copyedit is completed;...

interesting. While not required for the DYK, the article could use a good copyedit to standardize the English. I recommend asking at the Guild. Regardless...

Cited: Interesting: Other problems: Overall: The article needs a good copyedit as some of the language is not quite standard English. The issue with the...

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although I've seen a hell of a lot worse, I'd still advocate you request a copyedit before I pass this.--Launchballer 09:20, 17 January 2016 (UTC) I've notified...

article could use a serious copyedit though. Maury Markowitz (talk) 12:22, 4 November 2014 (UTC) If it needs a copyedit, it's not ready for the main...

The author did his QPQ. The only thing missing to get a GTG is a robust copyedit. Alex2006 (talk) 18:58, 13 February 2015 (UTC) I will try to get some help...

also use a copyedit for English grammar.Yoninah (talk) 21:05, 13 March 2019 (UTC) The hook needs to be reworded. I have tried to copyedit the last paragraph...

(UTC). Article new and long enough, well cited and interesting. It needs a copyedit, because some of it doesn't make sense or is poor English. The hook, equally...

too. But I suppose I can do that for you real quick. With regards to the copyedit: it's closer, but the article has still got a long way to go. Examples...

DYK. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 11:29, 13 January 2017 (UTC) I will give this a copyedit tomorrow. However good grammar and writing is not a DYK requirement. Graeme...

it was withdrawn? I would like to suggest that the article be given a copyedit. —BlueMoonset (talk) 16:09, 6 April 2014 (UTC) It's been nearly two weeks...

obituary. This needs to be resolved before approval. Overall: I did a copyedit of the article during my review to remove POV phrasing. There are some...

be rephrased Other problems: - Seems like this article could use a good copyedit before hitting the main page. Hook eligibility: Cited: - Doesn't seem like...

citation. --Gfosankar (talk) 14:18, 8 June 2014 (UTC) The article needs a copyedit for English grammar, and also a cite after the hook fact. Yoninah (talk)...

(talk). Nominated by LauraHale (talk) at 03:16, 14 July 2012 (UTC) After a copyedit to remove verbose language and repetition, the article still meets the...

22:42, 12 May 2013 (UTC). Citation needed tag, seems to need a bit of a copyedit (fixed a blatant typo just now). License of the image in its description...

thorough copyedit as the article still reads a little clunky from the translation. A huge thank you to User:Rjjiii and User:TSventon for the copyedit! Looks...

references and if possible do a quick copyedit. Crisco 1492 (talk) 00:44, 27 August 2011 (UTC) Accessdates done, copyedit to be done later. Globalwheels (talk)...

is awaiting a copyedit from the Guild of Copy Editors. BlueMoonset (talk) 16:11, 13 September 2021 (UTC) Does anyone want to copyedit this? The article...

-- Presearch (talk) 22:49, 27 December 2012 (UTC) This article needs a copyedit before it is ready for the front page. There are problems ranging from...

Overall: Article itself need some work; I went ahead and did a short copyedit, but there's also some gaps in information. Would like to see this resolved...

nominator ask the Guild of Copy Editors to copyedit the article, and that this review be put on hold until the copyedit is done, as has been done with other...

Needs a thorough copyedit... I'll get on that. Referencing is thorough and formatted. Paraphrasing looks okay. Summary: Hold for copyedit and feedback on...

in the article also the Raka party is mentioned. Moreover, some minor copyedit could be necessary. Alex2006 (talk) 18:02, 7 October 2014 (UTC) Hi Alex...

December 2017 (UTC) I will do a copyedit to address this. Graeme Bartlett (talk) 21:31, 21 December 2017 (UTC) copyedit complete.Graeme Bartlett (talk)...

MEDUSAtalk 19:49, 24 July 2019 (UTC) The article also probably needs a copyedit: I can see some typo errors and awkwardly-constructed phrases in the article...

incorrect capitalization.|date=June 2026}} would display as: (although {{copyedit}} would be the more appropriate tag to use in that specific case) The descriptor...

addressed the copyedit issue, which remains significant. The rest of the review depends on the final form of the article, post-copyedit. Please take care...

16 December 2019 (UTC) @Raymie:,QPQ done! BTW, thanks a lot for your copyedit: as native Italian, my english is far from perfect... Cheers, Alex2006...

incorrect capitalization.|date=May 2026}} would display as: (although {{copyedit}} would be the more appropriate tag to use in that specific case) The descriptor...

"Development" section, especially, reads like a news release. I've attempted some copyedit but more work is needed. Please improve the prose. — Preceding unsigned...

no copyright violations seen, but is not long enough with only 1214 B. Copyedit tag should also be removed, only after it's fixed. Both hooks are interesting...

sentences get really short and stocky. Furthermore, in select sentences, the copyedit did not always improve the prose. The line "In a nursery run in Devanahalli...

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prose is not at a level deserving of the main page. I recommend that you copyedit it; if you like, I can do it for you. Sources: I don't speak either Dutch...

needs a copyedit to improve the English prose. If the article cannot be expanded, there's not much point in proceeding. As far as the copyedit goes, Piotrus...

exile" rather than "in exile". It would help if the article received a copyedit. BlueMoonset (talk) 08:30, 4 November 2013 (UTC) Thanks for your remarks...

copyedit; without improvement, it should not be linked to from the main page, so there's no point in doing a detailed review here until the copyedit is...

Cancela." is uncited. AGF on foreign language sources. Summary: Hold pending copyedit and referencing. Crisco 1492 (talk) 06:34, 31 August 2011 (UTC) For your...

as organized by WikiProject Alien: Collaboration of the month: Alien 3 Copyedit/extensive work: Expand: Requests: Stubs: Other: See the things to do page...

hoping somebody would have a done a copyedit and better lede on Mildred Harnack. If somebody can do a lede and do a copyedit.. I'll do a lede in the next couple...

wording in places could be arguably more different (I suggest a thorough copyedit for this purpose). - Jarry1250 [Deliberation needed] 17:44, 21 February...

set. Abyssal (talk) 16:05, 4 October 2012 (UTC) The article needs a good copyedit, as the use of English is a bit shaky throughout, and I thought care also...

but the connection must be made clear). Fifthly, the article needs a copyedit. Mentions of media outlets, such as The Wire, The Hindu, or Washington...

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their current form. One suggestion I could give could be to request for a copyedit of the article over at WP:GOCE/R; this could also prove useful as there...

really understand it after reading the lede. The article needs a though our copyedit as well, but that is not a DYK issue. Maury Markowitz (talk) 16:18, 28...

Yngvadottir's copyedit back on January 27 was sufficient? BlueMoonset (talk) 03:43, 20 February 2017 (UTC) * @BlueMoonset: Ah, I overlook Yngvadottir's copyedit. I...

that this article could use a copyedit. Z1720 (talk) 23:59, 17 May 2021 (UTC) Z1720 and Hawkeye7 I requested a copyedit while uploading the article but...

is full of typos and grammatical problems. The article needs a thorough copyedit for English grammar. Here is a proposed alt: ALT1: ... that India's Yanaimalai...

mentioned above, my biggest concern is that the article about Perez needs a copyedit. Mentoz86 (talk) 16:29, 31 May 2013 (UTC) Comment - Just a couple of points...

(UTC) I think ALT1 works. Right now what I think needs to be done is a copyedit. The article mentions her career before stuff like her birth and education...

(talk). Self nominated at 19:54, 23 June 2013 (UTC). This one could use a copyedit, I might do some work on it myself in the next day or two. Also, I think...

(talk) @Yoninah: It seems copyedit is completed. See the latest revision. — Amkgp 💬 17:29, 8 December 2020 (UTC) Great, the copyedit has been completed and...

However, content needs to be a touch more readable. I would suggest on more copyedit before prime time, there are some awkward phrasings such as "Upanishads...

well-written (though the latter is a bit quote-heavy). The Plot section needs a copyedit pretty badly though. Was this auto-translated or something? The rest of...

this is a volcanic eruption. Overall: Very nice article. Suggest a good copyedit, as some sentences are a bit clunky (such as "warfare and other plights...

hook is ok and cited. The article is written in poor English and needs a copyedit before going on the main page. You can make a request at Wikipedia:WikiProject...

the review! I hadn't got to the copyedit stage yet at the time of the nomination, but now have given it a good copyedit. (It is hard to see ones own errors...

organized by WikiProject Punk music: Collaboration of the month: Bikini Kill Copyedit/extensive work: Expand: Requests: Stubs: Other: See the things to do page...

organized by WikiProject Post-hardcore: Collaboration of the month: Emo Copyedit/extensive work: Expand: Requests: Stubs: See Category:Stub-Class Post-hardcore...

undergoing a copyedit so I'll wait to restore the tick. Yoninah (talk) 19:19, 28 December 2020 (UTC) Thank you for waiting. The copyedit has been completed...

it a bit of a copyedit. --Rosiestep (talk) 03:00, 7 August 2012 (UTC) Good to go following brilliant rewrite (far more than a copyedit!) by Rosiestep...

is not specifically referenced. The whole article could also do with a copyedit to correct minor capitalization and grammar errors. — SMUconlaw (talk)...

Thanks for taking a look! I have gone through and given the article a copyedit, hopefully that clears up most issues. I have also put that footnote in...

interesting alternative could be suggested. Otherwise i think it just needs a copyedit to pass.Lihaas (talk) 14:06, 2 May 2012 (UTC) Suggesting ALT1 as more interesting...

I should've given it a good copyedit before nominating it (I came across it via NPP). Regardless, I finished the copyedit and source-editing, and the...

trouble opening reference 3 to confirm the hook. However it does need a copyedit by someone familiar with word order. I propose a less awkward sounding...

and the text represents accurately the (few) sources I checked, but a copyedit for English grammar is needed. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 05:20, 6 June 2013 (UTC)...

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do something independently no problem. Just let me know if you want a copyedit. Crisco 1492 (talk) 14:55, 2 February 2012 (UTC) Reviewed: List of Detroit...

ranges, so that's good). All good on that front. The article needs a good copyedit by a native English speaker before it's ready for the homepage (I have...

copyedit the article (which was really in a shameful state, SOM!). You can either give green light for a review or wait for a professional copyedit....

Stubs: Category:Morocco stubs Verify: Update: Human rights in Morocco NPOV: Copyedit: Economy of Morocco - Geography of Morocco - Demographics of Morocco Wikify:...

quick look at the article and I would suggest that the article be given a copyedit, as the tone of the article doesn't seem to be very neutrally-worded but...

would delete ref 5. Also, I recommend a copyedit for grammar, spelling, and punctuation. I'll do my own copyedit after you're finished. Photo is fine. Thank...

found. QPQ unnecessary and image properly licensed. I'd like to see a copyedit carried out before I approve this, as both it and the hook are written...

Everything checks out, but I'd like to see this article go through a thorough copyedit before I'm comfortable passing it. Points of concern: "His religion was...

English. I couldn't support this appearing on Main Page without a good copyedit. Same for all of the proposed hooks. Main Page is not a place for less...

copyedits but otherwise it's well written and the sourcing looks fine. Prioryman (talk) 07:17, 30 May 2012 (UTC) Thanks for the review and copyedit! — Crisco...

speaker.--Carabinieri (talk) 12:46, 23 May 2012 (UTC) I have now requested a copyedit at WP:GOCE, but we'll see how long time it'll take Mentoz86 (talk) 13:29...

(UTC) C/e done mate. Soham 15:29, 3 February 2014 (UTC) I'm afraid your copyedit seems to have made the article more incomprehensible. -- Ohc ¡digame! 15:51...

Review: page is new and big enough, correct person credited. I recommend a copyedit perhaps from GOCE experts. Copyright infringement is not evident. Fully...

sampling of the article, but a suggestion (also for the GAN) would be a copyedit, as I found some things even in the lead to improve Chris857 (talk) 03:30...

the article is classified as a stub, reassess it. The article need some copyedit and reorganisation. -Nizil (talk) 05:46, 31 March 2019 (UTC) There is potential...

to you when the copyedit has been completed. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 07:07, 10 April 2018 (UTC) @Narutolovehinata5:, the copyedit has been completed...

Babble ☯ 10:48, 10 June 2013 (UTC) Okay, can you please make the necessary copyedit? --Tito Dutta  (talk • contributions • email) 11:08, 10 June 2013 (UTC)...

" not "New strategy was". These kinds of errors run throughout. Get a copyedit, and I see no reason this shouldn't pass. Norstrem (talk) 05:10, 15 November...

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knowledgeable editor.--Kevmin § 03:23, 29 November 2016 (UTC) I am doing a grammar copyedit, and will check references which all seem to be in sciencedirect. The crystallballing...

than the nominator, but it looks like a Stub to me. the article needs a copyedit, the English is not of a sufficient standard. I do not understand what...

article needs a copyedit, for punctuation, word choice, grammar. Drmies (talk) 05:17, 14 January 2012 (UTC) I've given it a copyedit, and I think the...

Freikorp (talk) 06:09, 28 October 2016 (UTC) The article needs a light copyedit for English grammar (adding "A" or "The" to the beginning of sentences)...

to see more hooks proposals first. In addition, the article could use a copyedit. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 10:50, 27 March 2024 (UTC) Nominator...

both copyedit and notification now. The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 07:04, 14 October 2016 (UTC) @The C of E: I gave the article a copyedit and reduced...

03:35, 20 December 2017 (UTC) Apocheir & CeeGee, I've given the article a copyedit and added two {{clarification needed}} tags where I'm not sure what's being...

to make another check against the sources, and more importantly, do a copyedit for grammar, punctuation and capitalization. Some of the reference links...

The Legend of Zorro 17:51, 9 July 2013 (UTC) Article needs a thorough copyedit before it can be returned to a prep area; there are several significant...

assuming good faith on all the Lithuanian content. The article could stand a copyedit (consider requesting one at WP:GOCE), and the phrase "national attributes"...

a copyedit at GOCE and will not approve this page until that is done. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 01:50, 29 May 2022 (UTC) @Sammi Brie:, copyedit complete...

of a GOCE copyedit. I noticed that a request has yet to be made, so I am reiterating that I will not be approving this until such a copyedit has been completed...

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The prose is of acceptable quality but would benefit from a specialist copyedit. However, I do have some concerns. Firstly, the spelling of M(u/o)hammed...

expanded at the time of Sdee's nomination, but needed a serious copyedit. I started to copyedit, and now it is 328 characters short of a 5x expansion. I am...

the article. It is riddled with poor English and POV and needs a serious copyedit before it can be considered for the main page. Incidentally, even the title...

source Pennsylvania Heritage. Reviewing the findings, the article needs a copyedit as close paraphrasing is more than just titles and the one lengthy quote...

copyedit yet?). There hasn't been a single edit to the article since my review. BlueMoonset (talk) 22:15, 5 September 2015 (UTC) While the copyedit has...

January 2018 (UTC) Thaddeus, if you'll throw in some raw material, I'll copyedit if you'd like that. EEng 21:36, 5 January 2018 (UTC) I'll hit my bookshelf...

completed a copyedit of the article. Best of luck on the nomination! Aerin17 (talk) 00:58, 12 April 2021 (UTC) As the article has received a GOCE copyedit, a new...

article I'm just having a little bit of trouble finding it. 2) This needs a copyedit for prose issues, as the current prose is very clunky and full of lots...

stub, and as such, it needs to be expanded further. It also needs a good copyedit (Where, for example, can you bruy players, or have they possibly been bought...

this, but also says who owned the church. The article could also use a copyedit: I started one, but stopped when I found the copying in the Background...

(UTC). New enough (yesterday) and long enough (2k chars). I made a minor copyedit and added one ref but otherwise sourced, neutral and no apparent copyvio...

Editor (talk). Self nominated at 21:59, 19 August 2014 (UTC). Did a light copyedit of hook. EEng (talk) 23:21, 19 August 2014 (UTC) New enough, long enough...

ref stuff should be in the refs. OK it has 1632 characters, but a good copyedit could fix this. Victuallers (talk) 11:28, 10 November 2011 (UTC) The article...

13 August 2018 (UTC) Hi, I came by to promote this, and did a thorough copyedit for English grammar. I added a few tags where a date would be appropriate...

proposing ALT2 instead. Also, it's been weeks and no work has been done on a copyedit: have you requested one from the Guild of Copy Editors (WP:GOCE) yet, or...

Article. Has had a fivefold expansion. Around 1,700 characters. Needed a copyedit, but no obvious policy violations. Hook. Short enough. Interesting enough...

you're trying to make in the hook. The article also needs a grammatical copyedit, especially in the lead, which should summarize the main points of the...

now inactive. This is not a review, but a comment: right now there's a copyedit template edit in the article which was added this month. This needs to...

seen the replies. Some of the writing is awkward and I think this needs a copyedit. There are phrases like On of his opponent during the election that need...

December. Given that the article has been tagged with both neutrality and copyedit templates, what makes the most sense at this point is to close the nomination...

Grammar may need some fixes. Paraphrasing looks okay. Summary: Good to go, though a copyedit would be nice. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 05:08, 11 July 2012 (UTC)...

page. BlueMoonset (talk) 20:24, 24 February 2013 (UTC) I did a thorough copyedit, removed POV language, and formatted all the references. I added 3 "citation...

this moving again, but before calling for a reviewer the article needs a copyedit. One example: "Partially ruined, since 2007 it is now owned by a private...

screen, Puck, Ur-Hamlet To Destub: Stub-Class Shakespeare articles To Copyedit: To Categorize: To Create: Shakespeare's characters (discussing his characters...

but will complain if it is used too much. Also, the articles need a good copyedit. I agree with Drmies that parts are too formulaic to be considered "new...

2012 (UTC) Meets all requirements for DYK, although could do with a light copyedit for flow in some places. But it's not so bad as to keep it off DYK. Miyagawa...

15:05, 19 August 2012 (UTC) Meets all requirements for DYK. I did a little copyedit for some overlink, and now it's good to go. Miyagawa (talk) 17:03, 19 August...

go. Johnbod (talk) 16:50, 2 October 2013 (UTC) Thanks for the review, copyedit and polish! QPQ = Kenneth A. Bollen Victuallers (talk) 20:06, 2 October...

rejected by Jolly Ω Janner 07:57, 14 March 2016 (UTC) Article was in need of copyedit ( Back to TM:TDYK Article history ) ... that after the death of the first...

would be quickly resolved. Article needs copyedit. Gatoclass (talk) 10:40, 26 June 2025 (UTC) What kind of copyedit, Gatoclass? It looks fine to me. Surtsicna...

artist of the late romantic era. References all check out. I did a basic copyedit for word flow, wikification, and readability - hopefully I didn't break...

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Log In (talk) 05:27, 31 July 2020 (UTC) OK Valereee, I'll consider the copyedit request as done, but the article still has some issues. I find the Directions...

sentence of the template. |reason=text or |2=text (or |for=text, as used by {{Copyedit}}) — gives a particular reason in the form "In particular, it has problems...

Review/Rate: Anagram To Merge/Split: To Destub: Stub-class articles To Copyedit: To Categorize: To Create: Eric Nusbaum, Pete Beatty To de-redlink: Lists...

references.Alexikoua (talk) 10:47, 7 December 2016 (UTC) The article needs a copyedit for English grammar. It also needs to be improved in the areas of the lead...

through, but the article is lacking citations for a lot of text, and needs a copyedit. I'll wait for a response and see if there are significant updates. Kingsif...

(UTC) Length, date, text, referencing all seem fine (I just did a quick copyedit). AGF on sources in a language I don't read. Hook is interesting. Moswento...

Council NPOV: K College Citation needed: Unreferenced Kent articles Cleanup/Copyedit: Kingdom of Kent Expert attention: Channel Tunnel, Bromley Civic Society...

Template:Did you know nominations/WZIP Comment: I have requested help with copyedit from Guild of Copy Editors. Thanks and regards Pratyk321 (talk) 07:07,...

surrounding geographical locations and I believe that it needs another copyedit. Page numbers from source 11 are needed.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 08:06, 17...

Overall: No concerns with source, all source checked. Conducted a bit of copyedit on hard-to-grasp sentences, feel free to revert and discuss if not agree...

Paraphrasing seems okay. Summary: Please clean up references and do a copyedit, or ask somebody at the Guild of Copyeditors to help you. Crisco 1492 (talk)...

are also a lot of awkward word choices that jump out, so I'd suggest a copyedit as well. SounderBruce 09:10, 4 February 2019 (UTC) Response I removed the...

authority? Reviewed: William of Brunswick-Lüneburg Comment: Long article, copyedit tag but underwent already important corrections Created/expanded by Serten...

paraphrasing with this source. In addition, the article still needs a full copyedit, as there are still typos and improperly-parsed symbols (for example: "we...

excess water from the Lake Habbaniyah via the Euphrates River ? Reviewer's copyedit: "... that Lake Milh in Iraq (pictured), a wetland of international importance...

not too well integrated in the rest of article, and would recommend a copyedit, but it is nothing that would stop the nomination. Constantine ✍ 08:15...

contains several formatting issues. Overall: Alt1 looks good to go save for a copyedit to bring it in line with WP:DYKHOOK. The article has a heavy reliance upon...

"founder"/"founded" duplication. However, the article has been tagged as needing a copyedit, which it does, and cannot be passed until the prose is improved. Fabdoull...

I'm not sure about use of US English and could possibly benefit from a copyedit at a later date but I don't see why these things should stop it being a...

BLP guidelines? Whilst I am unsure, I think not). The article needs a copyedit. Issues include "Of the solo tracks on the album is 'Pobre Corazón' by...

Poeticbent talk 00:26, 24 July 2012 (UTC) Thank you for the review and copyedit of the article. I have listed my reviewed article above. Oceanh (talk)...

below 1,000 characters (bulleted lists do not count), and a prominent copyedit tag. Many sentences, including the hook, are not grammatical. I am also...

amphibian were named after Arthur Lennox Butler? Source: As above Minor copyedit done Looks good to go. Papamac (talk) 08:52, 30 August 2019 (UTC) Iainmacintyre...

Based on one of the omboxes, with a personal touch for those who either copyedit or fight vandals. The above documentation is transcluded from Template:Vandalism...

MANdARAX • XAЯAbИAM 00:05, 21 May 2013 (UTC) Thank you for reviewing the DYK and the copyedit you gave the article. AshLin (talk) 01:26, 21 May 2013 (UTC)...

looks a lot better now. However, I'd still suggest that it be given a copyedit to make it read better. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 01:16, 2 March 2020...

2023 (UTC) Reading the article I would also suggest that it be given a copyedit. Suggesting an alternative hook, even though I think some variant of ALT0...

decent - a bit dry, but I'm hard-pressed to improve on it - though I made a minor copyedit. Good to go. Pi.1415926535 (talk) 07:19, 25 February 2020 (UTC)...

makes this good to go. Raintheone (talk) 12:19, 16 January 2019‎ (UTC) Copyedit hook per source. "Advocacy work" is different from "advocating". Yoninah...

English needs to be reworked. Please see to it that this article receives a copyedit.—♦♦ AMBER(ЯʘCK) 12:39, 8 March 2016 (UTC) Now done. –  Ohc ¡digame! 05:33...

Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:56, 5 March 2019 (UTC) This article needs a copyedit before being promoted. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:11, 11 March 2019 (UTC) @Cwmhiraeth:...

child receiving a genetic disorder? Makes sense. I gave the alt a minor copyedit but happy with it other than that. Sam Walton (talk) 10:07, 22 April 2014...

think it's there yet... Is it better now? Should I maybe ask someone for a copyedit? (The problem is that I don't even know myself what I want to say with...

provided to verify the information. Interesting: Overall: I did an extensive copyedit of the article while reviewing it and added tags next to statements that...

in short, it needs a thorough copyedit. I would recommend that the Guild of Copy Editor be asked to provide the copyedit, while additional sourcing be...

(talk). Self-nominated at 05:20, 10 February 2020 (UTC). I made one minor copyedit to the hook (capital N in Neolithic), otherwise the article is new and...

national football team", it is not ready for the main page, and needs a good copyedit before it will be. BlueMoonset (talk) 15:46, 27 October 2012 (UTC) copy...

grammatical errors. It is not ready for promotion in this state and needs a copyedit for English grammar. The hook also needs to be polished. Do you mean: ALT1:...

25 September 2022 (UTC) Actually I'm not too sure, but I trust the promoters to copyedit as needed. – Muboshgu (talk) 23:02, 29 September 2022 (UTC)...

is highly problematic, with inadequate sourcing and in need of a major copyedit.) ( Back to TM:TDYK Article history ) ... that one geopolitical corridor...

paraphrasing has been dealt with. However, the article could use a good copyedit, and the sourcing also needs work. The first two paragraphs under History...

(talk). Self-nominated at 13:14, 17 April 2021 (UTC). I made one minor copyedit ("serve" is often abused for simply "doing the job one is paid for"), but...

copied from [1] and then changed. A copyvio was avoided (esp. after a copyedit by me) but the resulting sentences were weird in many cases because extra...

interesting hook. Probably the first DYK nom that I can't at least make a copyedit on. Have you thought about using this picture? to illustrate your DYK?...

capitalization) if that was not a formal job title. Image is PD. Gave it a copyedit; no other textual issues. Looks good to me. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c)...

The spelling and grammar in this article is shambolic - please request a copyedit.--Launchballer 00:44, 30 July 2015 (UTC) I added "fatal". Copy edit done...

thorough copyedit for grammar. I'll fix what I can, but no guarantees. Grumpylawnchair (talk) 05:31, 9 February 2025 (UTC) After some copyedits by a couple...

CeeGee (talk). Self-nominated at 08:34, 5 June 2016 (UTC). I've had to copyedit much of the article, but the content looks good. It clocks in a hair above...

like copyvio. Hook fact is cited and interesting. I have made a slight copyedit to the hook (linking A-rated instead of just the A) to make the links more...

picture correctly tagged. Two concerns: Some sentences could do with a copyedit(eg:"Hauger made his for Hannover 96 on 6 August 2011"- made his what?/...

BlueMoonset (talk) 17:03, 23 March 2016 (UTC) While the GOCE has completed the copyedit, the QPQ is still not supplied; holding off calling for a new reviewer...

fact to Swedish-language source (translation checks out). I've had to copyedit the page's English some, as it was a bit rough. I'd recommend to a promoter...

@Narutolovehinata5: I did the copyedit. Please finish the review. Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 15:01, 6 July 2020 (UTC) Thanks for the copyedits. I still think a hook...

mostly' to 'mostly by') - will check with nominator, and am also going to copyedit the article, having noticed a couple of things on re-reading it. Carcharoth...

import of history, no copyvio issues visible. Article needs a thorough copyedit before it can appear on the Main Page, though. Reference 7 (Freitag) seems...

insufficient expansion and referencing, and the article has since picked up a copyedit tag, meaning a significant edit for prose quality is also needed. Closing...

Quetzal1964 (talk). Self-nominated at 12:15, 27 April 2019 (UTC). I did a little copyedit. Newly created article, article over 1500 characters, cited and interesting...

ago. no copyvio found. hook seems fine to me. Could probably do with a copyedit for wikilinks and prose work, but otherwise Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk...

nom at 07:39, 26 September 2011 (UTC) Boleh, but I'm going to give it a copyedit. No need to go AGF as I can read Malaysian. Crisco 1492 (talk) 15:42, 1...

violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing: Other problems: - Needs a copyedit, for example: lots of its/it's confusion, "The Dia Art Foundation purchased...

many sentences in a row, instead of letting them run—which has led to a copyedit template being added to the page. The article has other issues as well:...

found okay. Writing style is a bit bumpy, the article could do with a copyedit from a native speaker. I did not find plagiarism but most of the provided...

unlisted sources.) While this issue is now settled, the article does need a copyedit: there are odd word choices and sentence. I'm also, frankly, troubled by...

public? Reviewed: Clarissa Chapman Armstrong Comment: I will still have copyedit done soon. Created by Pudeo (talk). Self-nominated at 14:24, 24 September...

Yoninah (talk) 22:27, 25 February 2020 (UTC) The article also needs a copyedit, starting with the first line. Yoninah (talk) 21:30, 1 March 2020 (UTC)...

possible copyedit of the "History" section. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 01:52, 15 January 2020 (UTC) @Nizil Shah: Suggesting that a copyedit be done to...

believe it is in need of a thorough copyedit and a new hook for the reasons outlined above. I apologize that my own copyedit of the article was imperfect and...

result was: rejected by Yoninah (talk) 23:44, 5 March 2017 (UTC) Still no copyedit and no QPQ ( Back to TM:TDYK Article history ) ... that the the Swiss Court...

Heidelberg during World War Two? Reviewed: QPQ = Rachel Morrison Comment: Do copyedit, add stuff. Any Chinese speakers are very welcome. For Women's History...

Basement12 (talk). Self nominated at 02:29, 9 August 2014 (UTC). Slight copyedit of hook to match the article. EEng (talk) 20:31, 9 August 2014 (UTC) Long...

November 2021 (UTC). New enough, long enough, QPQ done. Gave it a light copyedit. Earwig detected no mass copying of prose, and a spotcheck of the print...

approved. My preference is for the wording used in ALT2. I made a slight copyedit to ALT2 ("sing with falsetto vocals on it" → "sing it with falsetto vocals")...

nomination cannot proceed without it. Please try to find someone who can copyedit for you soon. Thank you. BlueMoonset (talk) 01:44, 9 January 2013 (UTC)...

that the author can claim to live in Rome. One thing--the article needs copyedits throughout to English the syntax a bit. But it's good enough for DYK....

cooperation is still suspended -- can't tell from article (which could use a copyedit BTW). EEng (talk) 17:32, 30 July 2014 (UTC) Gtg, no copyvio and paraphrasing...

suggested to make cut", "doctors", "main") but I don't personally wish to copyedit it. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:40, 1 October 2017 (UTC) Distasteful or not, (see...

a very quick copyedit, may come back for another pass.--Launchballer 08:17, 12 April 2024 (UTC) @Launchballer: Thanks for the copyedit; is everything...

functionality was needed from this template, it would require the following copyedit anyway; in my opinion: The message begins as: "You are involved in a recently...

history, and place. But maybe there the parallel ends? I have done a minor copyedit, and I'm in the process of setting up the Commons categories for it and...

05:43, 1 June 2012 (UTC) Thank you Ultracobalt for doing the review, and for your copyedit to Jerzy Waldorff. Poeticbent talk 13:32, 1 June 2012 (UTC)...

needs a good copyedit by someone with the skills to identify and avoid close paraphrasing. I strongly suggest you request such a copyedit at the Guild...

comma use? Rcsprinter (talk) 12:28, 2 January 2012 (UTC) I've done a quick copyedit of the article to address the punctuation issues and everything else looks...

21 May 2016 (UTC) It is. Copyedit requested. Triplecaña (talk) 21:13, 21 May 2016 (UTC) @Jaespinoza:, @BlueMoonset: Copyedit done by the Guild. Triplecaña...

Boжinov — 10:40, 22 March 2016 (UTC) The English certainly needs a light copyedit by a native speaker. Johnbod (talk) 14:47, 23 March 2016 (UTC) After a...

achievable). Looking at the article, it looks like it could do with a quick copyedit, and the first reference needs to be filled out properly. No evidence of...

08:02, 8 November 2013 (UTC) QPQ = M.E. Blanton House Verified QPQ and copyedit, and that hook fact is present and cited. Promoting per prior review and...

faithful to source material. Some meanings were changed and I needed to copyedit the prose for grammar. Looks better now, but this sentence "Her multimedia...

done some copyediting of the hooks. I will also give the article a basic copyedit. Therefore, I will leave the reviewing to someone else. Trainsandotherthings...

nominations. charlotte 👸🎄 06:12, 26 December 2024 (UTC). Hi. Made a copyedit here before my review; feel free to revert some of the changes if you don't...

(talk). Self nom at 05:53, 14 September 2012 (UTC) I've performed a minor copyedit on the hook, but the hook is unreferenced. I'd also like the article to...

fine with me, of course. Will leave the ultimate decision to promoter and the folks who copyedit the hooks. DanCherek (talk) 16:00, 6 April 2021 (UTC)...

Venanzio Rauzzini? ALT1:... have a go Reviewed: QPQ = Euphemia Lamb Comment: copyedit and mods welcomed. For Women's History Month Created by Victuallers (talk)...

acknowledge her more promptly. Date, length, online source, hook all fine. Minor copyedit. No overly close paraphrasing. Do you feel confident that the photo in...

(UTC) Hi, I came by to promote this, and first gave the article a thorough copyedit for English grammar. While the beginning of the hook is stated and sourced...

newspapers. ASTRONOMYINERTIA (TALK) 15:08, 11 May 2012 (UTC) I did some copyedits. Grammar is good enough now, although fresh eyes may help. Date, length...

before the review continues, I would suggest that the article be given a copyedit. The first hook is probably the best option here. Narutolovehinata5 (talk...

but you then run the risk of a subsequent copyedit taking it under again. (I know me and Airship copyedit articles before promoting; you might get someone...

Focus (talk) 02:49, 5 December 2012 (UTC) The article needs a thorough copyedit: there are sentences that just don't work, and others that are odd—what...

Maury Markowitz (talk) 20:55, 10 January 2021 (UTC) Needs a thorough copyedit, but not DYK related. Maury Markowitz (talk) 20:55, 10 January 2021 (UTC)...

requirements, even if it would be a nice enhancement to use the templates. The copyedit and additional wikification does need to be attended to, however. (Like...

separate species. Once these get fixed it will be GtG (good to go). I would copyedit the articles to fix these minor concerns but since I am the reviewer I...

article itself doesn't clarify this quite as well, so I've done a small copyedit there. The expansion went from 1,351 characters to 7,986 in this time,...

that point the hook is too long for my taste). Please check the recent copyedit I made in the article. Request for February 29 appearance. MX (✉ • ✎) 04:05...

Makeandtoss (talk) 12:07, 24 August 2016 (UTC) Since the suggested hook is a simple copyedit of the original hook I will go with the alt1 hook for prep 5...

reworded anyway, so no issues there. I gave the article a pretty thorough copyedit as some phrases struck me as old-timely; feel free to fix where I've overstepped...

Fascinating article, but I would like you to first go back through this and copyedit what needs to be corrected. Also, I ran the Earwig tool, and it came up...

a bit scary). Good to go now. Prioryman (talk) 20:27, 29 January 2012 (UTC) Thanks for the copyedit!--Jetstreamer (talk) 20:34, 29 January 2012 (UTC)...

Feel free to ping me after the appropriate citation is inserted and a copyedit for neutrality has been done. Please don't let this discourage you! You've...

Lecomte is long enough and new enough and its Earwig is clean. I gave it a copyedit and removed some surplus sections but I see no other blockers. I'll take...

advertisement. So please neutralise the header? I have given the article a minor copyedit, and added a missing reference. That does not affect this DYK nomination...

the backlog of articles that require copy editing; those carrying the {{copyedit}} tag or listed on the GOCE Requests page. It will begin on , at 00:00...

Yoninah, did that help any, or are we basically still where we were? Would a copyedit help? The GOCE isn't nearly as backed up as usual at the moment; one of...

straight forward Whispyhistory (talk) 19:30, 18 January 2019 (UTC) ..a tag to copyedit style/grammar was added after review. Best to sort this out before approving...

appear in hidden text but not in the article. The article now needs a copyedit, and also a section dealing with Hastie's improprieties in an NPOV way...

Carlojoseph14 (talk · contribs)! I prefer your alternative hook, which is a good copyedit of my hook, making it more concise and precise. Cunard (talk) 05:32, 3...

recommend use on Feb 11 as per Victallers). I gave the article a good copyedit and then added some material, so I feel someone else should do a full review...

Armadillopteryxtalk 04:53, 23 May 2020 (UTC) @Armadillopteryx: Thanks for the copyedit and the review. I've added the wikilink as suggested. buidhe 05:28, 23...

different place but take a look and see what you think. I also did a minor copyedit just for post-translation word flow and clarity. Otherwise article is good...

very far from appearing on mainspace. Recommend the nominator to request copyedit of article at Wikipedia:WikiProject Guild of Copy Editors/Requests. Cowlibob...

with guidelines that overlap with that of the DYK system. While I would copyedit the hook to say "...by rolling up a sleeve to reveal a tattoo of its logo"...

26 (spin me / revolutions) 14:40, 2 July 2015 (UTC) The article needs a copyedit for English grammar before it can go to the main page. There must be a...

Victuallers (talk) 11:55, 13 November 2015 (UTC) Victuallers I did a blind copyedit of the file, so there is no chance I would have intentionally duplicated...

in gymnastics". It is not the same. If this is not clear enough, I can copyedit. Please comment. CeeGee 07:38, 12 June 2018 (UTC) Yes, on second read,...

know nominations/Thihapate of Mohnyin Comment: I have requested help with copyedit from Guild of Copy Editors. Thanks and regards Pratyk321 (talk) 06:00,...

is OK and has an inline citation for the hook facts. The article has a copyedit tag but I consider the prose acceptable. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:36, 2 September...

problem and add quite a bit to the article. I made two edits, one a basic copyedit and the other to add more context and try to make the article more neutral...

claiming this for review. I like ALT1 the most and I have made some minor copyedits to it, but can it be rephrased? "Production" is vague (the article states...

10 January 2007: Needs a picture and desperately needs a good cleanup/copyedit (the Chengdu J-7 needs the latter, also). Mikoyan MiG-29, Mikoyan MiG-29M...

items I brought up as examples. I suggest that you ask another editor to copyedit it, to gain another set of eyes to improve it. This article is unfortunately...

(pictured)? I'd also like to mention that the article could use a light copyedit. "The" and "a" are missing from these lines, for example: The Royal Tomb...

The one thing that requires attention is the shaky English; it needs a copyedit by somebody who is more familiar with the language. Beyond that, a suggested...

for the immediately prior sentences. Also, the article needs to have a copyedit for grammar, for example "In 1994 and 1996 the portrait..." and the entire...

198 characters. Miyagawa (talk) 18:06, 17 July 2012 (UTC) Did a further copyedit as I said "stadium" twice in the hook and it didn't sound good - but should...

now resolved, a thorough copyedit has been done (many thanks Victuallers). Lead looks fine now. I made some tiny copyedits to assist. Overall, she is...

interesting. Article is well-constructed, although could perhaps use a small copyedit. Great pictures, too. Thank you! groupuscule (talk) 09:59, 7 November 2012...

issues that it would have taken too long to explain them all to you. (That copyedit does not affect the nom., and it has not affected content.) Storye book...

Article: New enough, long enough. I've fixed some grammar, but another copyedit would be useful. Referencing is fairly thorough, but the last sentence...

hooks are OK, but I think the first one is better. I would make a minor copyedit, however: ... that ancient Roman surgeons used materials such as bran and...

7&6=thirteen (☎) 11:14, 19 February 2012 (UTC) All good to go. I made an extra copyedit and added the citations to the quotes. Miyagawa (talk) 12:36, 19 February...

(talk) 10:48, 12 January 2019 (UTC) I made some edits and removed the copyedit tag. Can you have a look to see if it's OK now? Xwejnusgozo (talk) 14:26...

2012 (UTC) Not a full-blown review or anything, but this really needs a copyedit. Keilana|Parlez ici 19:24, 10 May 2012 (UTC) Great idea! I will get a GOCE...

composition of the three in German or the one in Latin. I did one small copyedit. The length is good, the time is fine. Earwig's tool shows no copyvios...

darn, I never noticed. Thanks anyway – up to GAN it goes, er, that is, after a thorough copyedit. ;) Cloudchased (talk) 02:48, 21 December 2013 (UTC)...

first paragraph in the Career section is quite garbled and could use a copyedit; it appears that a number of words may be missing. Copyright issues are...

Quelccaya Ice Cap? Reviewed: Paraelongatoolithus Comment: Imma request a copyedit as well. Note that the article was expanded in an user sandbox whose history...

July 2017 (UTC). The article looks fine to me, but would benefit from a copyedit for spelling issues, spacing and position of in-lines refs and/or full-stops...

reference. This is ready. SL93 (talk) 22:30, 25 March 2022 (UTC) Here is a copyedit of ALT0 - "... that journalist Travis Lupick first wrote about the opioid...

enough, long enough, adequately sourced. I did a complete English-language copyedit and, checking the Spanish sources on Google Translate, do not see any close...

Really interesting, little article. My one recommendation would be to do a copyedit of the article, mainly looking for punctuation; each of those prepositional...

copyvio tool is currently unavailable, so this has not yet been checked. The copyedit tool shows no plagiarism, copyvios or close paraphrasing issues. The hook...

weeks, a copyedit may be needed for the nomination to move forward. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 12:54, 13 October 2019 (UTC) I've requested a copyedit over...

even though rejected. I would just request the nominator to do a quick copyedit check. Also, I don't think it necessary to list the entire twelve nominations...

the non-neutral phrasing request or the overall need for a significant copyedit. As this is about eight weeks old now, an extra week's grace seems more...

because the issues with the paraphrasing remain and are significant, and the copyedit is still needed: the Critical reception section has issues with each of...

is cited with inline citation. QPQ was done. I will approve after the copyedit of the a.m. issue is addressed. CeeGee 13:32, 24 March 2019 (UTC) Thank...

incorrect grammatical constructions throughout. I'd suggest that you request a copyedit over at WP:GOCE/R before this nomination can continue. Narutolovehinata5...

March 2021 (UTC) Okay, then we're sorted. Only other quibble is could you copyedit the main hook so the word "speech" doesn't appear twice? Ritchie333 (talk)...

13:19, 2 August 2019 (UTC) @Spokoyni: Thanks for the review, and for the copyedit work on the article. I have resolved the citation needed tag, and completed...

reworking. — LlywelynII 18:48, 12 May 2022 (UTC) @LlywelynII: I have requested copyedit at https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:WikiProject_Guild_of_Copy_E...

7&6=thirteen (☎) 15:52, 10 February 2016 (UTC) This article was in need of a copyedit, so I gave it one. I request another reviewer takes a look at this, and...

Gerald Waldo Luis and Jeromi Mikhael to expand the article. It also needs a copyedit. ALT1 is the preferred hook. VincentLUFan (talk) (Kenton!) 11:51, 24 August...

of E:. I was on a NYE holiday. I've removed the tag, and will do some copyedit fixes. If that tag is your only comment then I guess it's ready to pass...

book (talk) 14:07, 22 October 2020 (UTC) Thank you for the review and copyedit. I have inserted the word "disagreement" to avoid any WP:ENGVAR issues...

to read. I think the author should do (or ask for) an English-language copyedit before this goes through. Yoninah (talk) 19:26, 9 October 2014 (UTC) The...

work Nsk92 (talk) 16:08, 6 September 2019 (UTC) Returned from prep for a copyedit of the article and a better hook. @CAPTAIN MEDUSA: You are interpreting...

I'm okay with ALT1a, too. Thanks for the feedback, all. I'll do another copyedit as per the above request. Christine (Figureskatingfan) (talk) 23:07, 27...

2012 (UTC) Thanks for the review and the GA tip. I plan to ask GOCE to copyedit the article first and then make a GA nom.--Tomobe03 (talk) 19:37, 18 May...

(talk) at 07:11, 26 January 2016 (UTC). This really needs some serious copyedit to fix a considerable amount of non-english grammar. Can we put a hold...

(talk) 10:09, 16 January 2012 (UTC) Checks out and ready to go. (Pardon my copyedit to the original hook which the source does support. I got lucky and got...

what I was thinking. ALT-1 looks good to go! (Note: I made a very minor copyedit: put quotation marks around "Stealing Peaches") Mz7 (talk) 20:49, 30 November...

right after each other. Those could be worded differently. I did a small copyedit, but more might need to be done. SL93 (talk) 20:42, 30 June 2022 (UTC)...

(and why is "all around" not the last thing mentioned?). I've made some copyedits, but it may need more. I fixed some templates: often "web" is used where...

Ultracobalt  (talk) 08:22, 2 July 2012 (UTC) I think the article needs a good copyedit, some of the prose is confusing or inaccurate, e.g. "It is often only found...

Template:Did you know nominations/Tattooing in China Comment: A slight copyedit work will be appreciated. Created by FaNCc (talk) and LUBINFNAN (talk)...

Yoninah (talk) 11:59, 31 May 2020 (UTC) @Shanze1: I have given the article a copyedit. I added a few "citation needed" tags where information needs to be sourced...

15:35, 1 January 2023 (UTC) Juxlos Thanks for your review. I've requested copyedit from my senior. pls kindly wait a few day. Thanks Taung Tan (talk) 16:03...

Be Crazy, but AllMovie found little resemblance between them? You can copyedit ALT1 if you wish, or add rewrites of it. --George Ho (talk) 07:15, 7 October...

sentence about painting and design is in a paragraph about confidants. A copyedit would also be useful. BlueMoonset (talk) 15:40, 6 July 2013 (UTC) It looks...

I'm definitely not comfortable with is the prose. I think this needs a copyedit to meet basic prose standards; there are some glaring formatting and prose...

look about copy edit of this article. Another editor and I completed the copyedit. The article is long enough (expanded enough), new enough, and has no copyright...

Katka vs. "She survived 1000 days there with her sister Katka" A thorough copyedit is recommended. Cited, no image, QPQ done. There also appears to be an...

March 2018 (UTC) Good edits all around, Drmies, thanks for the points and copyedit. Here are some alts (speaking of squeaking by, ALT2 is, by sheer dumb luck...

nom at 13:47, 23 April 2012 (UTC) Date, length good. Needs a bit of a copyedit. I would like to see more than a single source in this article. The Interior...

"Working" tag on the request, and we shouldn't promoted this DYK until the copyedit has been completed. BlueMoonset (talk) 15:19, 4 July 2016 (UTC) Alternative...

sentence structure was quite repetitive. I took the liberty of doing a copyedit. I found two places under Ministerial posts where (1) a word is missing...

(UTC) Apologies for not getting back here sooner. Article given light copyedit Source agree with article content I see no copyvio, though the one PDF...

enough, seems neutral, no significant style problems (I just did a minor copyedit), QPQ done, hook interesting. I don't have access to many of the references...

short enough, and verified. I added "businessman" to the hook as a slight copyedit, since readers wouldn't otherwise have any clue who he is. ~ RobTalk 14:53...

aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:20, 21 April 2019 (UTC) @Piotrus: A copyedit of the article is required. RRD (talk) 08:39, 24 April 2019 (UTC) @Nihil...

MANdARAX • XAЯAbИAM 08:46, 30 October 2014 (UTC) Went through and did a copyedit and fixed the refs. How're we looking now?--Church Talk 20:12, 28 October...

hook sentence. Random86 (talk) 22:35, 24 May 2016 (UTC) I did a slight copyedit to fix some close paraphrasing on the hook sentence. Problems fixed and...

ComputerJA (☎ • ✎) 18:18, 15 July 2014 (UTC) The article needs a thorough copyedit. There are periods instead of commas, not enough commas, pieces of sentences...

Tintor2 (talk) 16:08, 16 September 2019 (UTC) I would also suggest that a copyedit for the article be requested at WP:GOCE/R since right now the article is...

List Concepts ・Twelve Nidanas ・Refuge (Buddhism) ・Kensho ・Yana ・Six realms ・Sravaka-Buddha ・Rupa ・Buddharupa ・Ksitigarbha ・Brahmavihara ・Ten spiritual...

September 2012 (UTC) Almost there - length, date are good. Just need one more copyedit - the sentence " This is range, azimuth, elevation angle and some send...

Template:Did you know nominations/UK cost of living crisis Comment: A copyedit and suggesting a better hook will be appreciated. Created by Mehediabedin...

I started reading the article and couldn't understand it. It needs a copyedit from someone familiar with English grammar. It also needs to be linked...

"effective on" that date, or even "as early as"; in fact, I've just done a copyedit of the section where I used the latter wording. I also included a few words...

free of copyright problems. QPQ not applicable. However you need to do a copyedit of the article. Example - this sentence "whereas the Y B. Chavan committee...

articles. If you think more is needed, mayby you could specify what kind of copyedit you are thinking of (language issues (spelling, grammar)? structure? style...

Initial copyedit preformed. --Kevmin § 01:30, 14 December 2025 (UTC) Thank you. I spotted a new error that was introduced during the copyedit: "Teh Auto-Vue"...

press. Also, I've done a few copyedits. Ritchie333 (talk) (cont) 20:36, 25 June 2015 (UTC) Thank you for the copyedits Ritchie333. I had originally considered...

long will the article be a candidate for DYK if we have to wait until the copyedit is done? Osplace 01:16, 19 October 2012 (UTC) Not that long. I'll try to...

this nom, it's on the next page). No textual issues; made some minor copyedits and added a citation invocation. Looks good to me...once you review another...

20 August 2020 (UTC) The hook is better but the article really needs a copyedit. You are misusing words like "lead" (should be "led") and "comprises" (should...

verification, copyvio checking, etc to other DYK reviewers, and mention that a copyedit is needed. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 19:32, 4 November 2013 (UTC) Normal full...

Your current article lead could be an article in itself. It should be copyedit to shorten it. It doesn't have to be so granular. --evrik (talk) 04:01...

hook wasn't based on the source, and the whole article needs a thorough copyedit before it can appear on the main page. Yoninah (talk) 21:21, 6 February...

original review. I think this would qualify to pass if it was given a copyedit. As mentioned above, there have been a lot of drive-by edits which introduce...

eligibility: Cited: Interesting: - Iffy on this one Other problems: - Copyedit: needs comma between "Road" and "the" Overall: Pretty good work, but would...

still 12 hours late because I chose to replace the Japanese references and copyedit the prose before nominating it here at DYK. I can understand if you want...

reply here 08:51, 16 January 2023 (UTC) @Piotrus: Thanks. Made a few copyedits. Marking ALT 0.1 as approved. Ktin (talk) 20:11, 16 January 2023 (UTC)...

responded to the copyedit request. SL93 (talk) 23:44, 5 May 2021 (UTC) The copyedit request is responded. Some sentences are modified. The copyedit is still processing...

violations (including from print sources). QPQ fulfilled. Gave it a light copyedit and expanded the end section to include the post-Battery-acquisition division...

06:12, 31 December 2015 (UTC) Hi, I came by to promote this and did a copyedit on the article, fixing links and formatting lists. A line seems to be missing...

fruition, not to let it wait for other reviewers to weigh in. I often copyedit articles and format references to bring the article up to snuff, for the...

25 March 2015 (UTC) I have placed a tag on the page; it really needs a copyedit to bring it up to encyclopedic standards. Lines like "She was keenly aware...

serious touch, very poor in structure, informations, citations and serious copyedit required, simply nowhere near to get a DYK nom. I apologise for this foolishness...

Espresso Addict (talk) 20:51, 5 March 2020 (UTC) I've done a bit of a copyedit so Earwig should complain less now. I agree that the article can be expanded...

(talk) 13:17, 19 December 2020 (UTC) Overall: I would suggest a general copyedit of the prose before the article makes it to the main page. Even though...

(talk) 12:50, 11 November 2017 (UTC) Thank you for the review and the copyedit—and well done distinguishing between fibula and fibula (brooch)! groupuscule...

refreshing :) The article is fine, I did a few copyedits but not many. But I also did some copyedits on the hooks, please check if they are still okay...

nominated at 09:03, 12 February 2015 (UTC). @MichaelQSchmidt: Needs a serious copyedit - "and event marking 25 years", ROS lede, etc. Willing to take a stab at...

November 2020 (UTC) Suitably sourced ALT0a; the article probably needs a copyedit for its conversational tone but it should suffice for DYK. Kingsif (talk)...

I realized the whole thing suffered from minor redundancies, so did a copyedit to clean up. New hook is fine, I'd suggest leaving in the 145-room but...

TempleM (talk) 21:25, 9 February 2017 (UTC) @TempleM: I gave the hook a copyedit. Since I'm also the nominator, mind taking a quick look and checking off...

February 2023 (UTC) Thanks. That part just needs a few minor grammar-related copyedits and this will be ready for a full review. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions)...

the article needs a copyedit. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 12:53, 25 July 2025 (UTC) No, Narutolovehinata5 the copyedit banner has never disqualified...

seems fine. I made an update for Mexico with a few sources I found in Spanish. Feel free to copyedit as you wish. MX (✉ • ✎) 05:49, 28 July 2017 (UTC)...

told from his POV. The prose is still clunky, but MD already asked for a copyedit which hopefully manages to reduce its size. The images were not there when...

Oops! Apologies, I misread. The article is then fine, I gave it a light copyedit. CAn I suggest a shortening of the hook? Maybe, ALT1: "... that the BBC...

November 2019 (UTC) Hi, I came by to promote this, and did a thorough copyedit for English grammar and spelling. There is one word that I can't make out;...

(UTC) I made a number of copyedits. Let's see if it works now. I don't think I can review it after the fairly large copyedit. Another question would be...

creation, but I'll IAR that. The main problem with the article is it needs a copyedit. Little grammatical and spelling errors are sprinkled throughout. The lead...

Having another source would be great. I have given the article a light copyedit, and it is otherwise good to go. --Ohconfucius ¡digame! 09:20, 13 October...

I would wait for the copyedit, since the problems are not (only) grammatical, but syntactical and idiomatic. After the copyedit I will give green light...

robust copyedit, which I've started, and will continue later.--Launchballer 11:45, 14 July 2024 (UTC) @Ghazaalch: I've given this a robust copyedit to remove...

same for verifiability. Remainder of approval per Yoninah's review and copyedit. Good to go. Baldy Bill (sharpen the razor|see my reflection) 22:02, 6...

could be wikilinked, hopefully to a specific article, as could peerage. Copyedit the hook please. — Frayæ (Talk/Spjall) 16:27, 29 October 2018 (UTC) @Frayae:...

article's improving but I strongly suggest you ask someone to do a third-party copyedit - I don't think it's the coverage, more the writing style. I still don't...

article is neutral, and a QPQ has been done. The article could do with a copyedit, and I don't like the Bibliography section one bit. What is the point of...

limited command over the English language. The article also needs a good copyedit, as a consequence of that.—♦♦ AMBER(ЯʘCK) 21:54, 25 April 2013 (UTC) My...

writing is a bit rough in some places, so perhaps you should ask for a copyedit. The hooks are cited inline to reliable sources; I prefer the first two...

rephrased. There are also a few other sentences that could do with a good copyedit for clarity. It's unclear at times which murder you are referring to in...

long enough. Referencing is fine. Needs a copyedit; I'll do the paraphrasing checks after I do the copyedit. Crisco 1492 (talk) 13:14, 7 January 2012...

TonyTheTiger (talk). Self nom at 03:38, 25 April 2012 (UTC) This needs a quick copyedit, and I'm a little worried about how short the last 2 sections are. But...

Gerda Arendt Changed per your suggestion. You did way more than "just" copyedit. The opera stuff is beyond my skill, I can only put in what the sources...

give it a caption. Anne (talk) 13:16, 16 April 2012 (UTC) I completed the copyedit and fixed the title with a page move. I also fixed the subject-verb agreement...

KittenKlub, thanks for another interesting Suriname article. I did a light copyedit, see what you think. The hook could do with tightening up a bit, I'm not...

Rsrikanth05: I can accept this being a day late, but the article needs a copyedit before this is approved. There are missing words and excessive commas here...

about the 2020 season. I took a look at the article and gave it a complete copyedit. Please check to see that I understood what you were talking about (I know...

fine [1], even by comparison to German refs. The article needed minor copyedit so it could be better understood by novices - this was done. Suggest similar...

becoming a DYK. I made a few copyedits to the page. Jon698 (talk) 01:44, 8 June 2021 (UTC) Thanks for the review and the copyedits, Jon698! ezlev (user/tlk/ctrbs)...

again? Juxlos (talk) 15:03, 12 August 2018 (UTC) @Juxlos: Thanks for the copyedit. Upon closer look I find some information that's not found in the given...

inconsistencies on rereading, and have just now given the article a further copyedit that includes an assertion of notability in the lead. -- Ohc ¡digame! 08:57...

for plagiarism. I've copyedited the hook a bit and done a substantial copyedit to the article, including trimming the citations per WP:OVERCITE. These...

inline cited to reliable sources - AGF for Italian sources. No obvious copyedit or close paraphrasing issues. QPQ done. I don't like the second hook; it...

character size. Originally translated from corresponding Bengali article. Any copyedit is always welcome for betterment. Created by FaysaLBinDaruL (talk). Number...

contribs) 22:08, 7 December 2012 (UTC) Summary of above: QPQ required, copyedit for grammar needed. BlueMoonset (talk) 01:24, 11 December 2012 (UTC) Issues...

and close paraphrasing: Other problems: - y This article really needs a copyedit. Quick examples: leeping / sleeping, ANkara / Ankara, fetures / features...

Self nom at 16:46, 13 December 2011 (UTC) Article needs a good copyedit, a real good copyedit. Note "parasite and parasitize" in the lead. I don't understand...

also issues with the improperly formatted hook, and the article has a copyedit tag on it. ( Back to TM:TDYK Article history ) The team behind the first...

I recommend a few other changes before the article is featured by DYK: Copyedit the article: the English needs a little work (translation from Spanish...

review please. Original reviewer not commented for a month. I have made a copyedit. Struck both hooks as they break NPOV and BLPCRIME. Cowlibob (talk) 11:38...

resolved by some copyediting. All we need is a trimmed hook, and that minor copyedit. --BrownHairedGirl (talk) • (contribs) 22:24, 2 January 2022 (UTC) @BrownHairedGirl:...

read of the article reveals that it is barely written in English. Please copyedit it before resubmitting. The Rambling Man (talk) 07:57, 12 October 2015...

articles, though? If so, I suppose I'd be okay with letting it go. Needs a copyedit. For example, this the second sentence: Rudd had previously wrestled in...

Howard in Shields' article. I gave both articles a quick, unprofessional copyedit (feel free to revert what I did). Overall, this looks pretty good. If anything...

universities. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:59, 9 December 2016 (UTC) I'll try to copyedit a bit, to make a better flow. As per the 1962 arrest, it was part of a...

of the sentence. It's interesting ... guess the crown was heavy? Minor copyedit to make text more neutral, fully cited in-line and no apparent copyvios...

alongside Rd. Mochtar? Reviewed: Uhura's Song Comment: User:Drmies has given a copyedit, if that can be credited for DYK Created by Crisco 1492 (talk) at 03:52...

working on a copyedit and will try to have it posted later today or tomorrow. – Reidgreg (talk) 18:21, 26 May 2024 (UTC) Okay, finished my copyedit. I removed...

August 2016 (UTC) New article, acceptable length and only needed a minor copyedit. Well sourced, although for the future it could benefit from some additions...

any of the hooks, but think the original has the most promise. Can we copyedit that hook? Proposing a new image. --evrik (talk) 20:14, 21 August 2020...

communist regime" is a bit faceless. ALT2 seems fine. Would you like to copyedit ALT0? —Kusma (talk) 11:16, 21 February 2022 (UTC) Kusma, I am fine with...

eligibility: Cited: Interesting: - n See comments Overall: I did an extensive copyedit of the article to remove duplicate information, merge sections into the...

--BrownHairedGirl (talk) • (contribs) 10:46, 10 September 2012 (UTC) Copyedit performed. As for requested information about access to the cited dead...

(talk) at 15:35, 23 December 2014 (UTC). Welcome! I'm going to do a quick copyedit (that is, make minor fixes to grammar, punctuation, and style). EEng (talk)...

about 1500 characters short. Bad grammar throughout but I'll give it a copyedit. The Geology section is lifted straight from the source, and I haven't...

reviewing this hook. I performed a very light copyedit,[1] but there may be a need for further copyedits. The text in the article says, "Some of the performances...

too many problematic sentences. In my opinion, the article needs a good copyedit before it is ready for Wikipedia's main page. BlueMoonset (talk) 00:24...

being a more effective hook than the current "inspiration".) I've done a copyedit and reduced the "one cite per sentence" to something more readable that...

judicial expressions are being used instead of plain English. Can you copyedit the lead, and any other sections that a layman wouldn't understand? Thanks...

understand the references. — Yerpo Eh? 07:26, 30 March 2012 (UTC) I did a minor copyedit (two fixes) to the society article (Norwegian Ornithological Society (1920–1935))...

before they were to be engaged? Article: Long enough, new enough. Needs a copyedit; lots of missing articles and particles. Referencing is poor (quotes need...

Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:18, 21 July 2015 (UTC) I gave the article a thorough copyedit, removing the fancruft. The ALT2 by User:Cwmhiraeth is definitely better...

please go back and follow the prompts. If you have come here to suggest copyedits, or notice typos to fix, they are probably deliberate. Please go back...

not a 5x expansion. The count went from 944 characters to 4525, which my copyedit brought down to 4429. You are a few sentences short (the target is 4,720)...

sufficient, If not, then I recommend that Gforsankar make a request for a copyedit at WP:GOCE/REQ, since articles must be completely understandable to run...

with this nomination and the article itself. Firstly, the article needs a copyedit and needs more sources (all the information is cited to one source: the...

article - length, date, references, and the text is now fine after a quick copyedit. I'll have to AGF on the hook source, but it definitely includes the number...

tegmine lyncis (talk) 22:28, 1 March 2012 (UTC) Thanks for your input! Copyedit done. Can you please have a look again? Thanks, Alex2006 (talk) 07:53,...

enough, New enough, moved to mainspace within last 5 days. Requires a full copyedit. References need expansion. AshLin (talk) 03:09, 27 April 2014 (UTC) I...

that lack at least one cite, per WP:DYKSG#D2. Third, I did a complete copyedit, and noted on the talk page that the external links in the last paragraph...

been a full month since TAP's last edit. I think the article could use a copyedit. The hook might be finessed by adding "a poll showing" after "despite"...

(UTC) Article nominated by since-blocked socking editor, and with a GOCE copyedit completed on May 18, the article is only 1469 prose characters, clearly...

a literary source), no major DYK-breaking issues. I did make a slight copyedit to remove the flowery language in the paragraph about her death, as we...

date, no QPQ needed (2 credits). ALT2 is verified and slightly modified (copyedit). Main hook: Nirvana means demise and liberation both as per ref. Latter...

June 2019 (UTC) Hi, I came by to promote this, and first did a thorough copyedit on the article. I added a line identifying who Kimball was, and I suggest...

a lot of strange\awkward phrasing. As such, it could really use a good copyedit. --ThaddeusB (talk) 03:49, 21 August 2013 (UTC) Thank you for your review...

--Storye book (talk) 11:04, 6 June 2014 (UTC) New review needed for my copyedit of the article and for ALT1.--Storye book (talk) 11:04, 6 June 2014 (UTC)...

hook appears on the Main Page. Fascinating article! Could use a little copyedit, but nothing interesting for DKY. Excellent hook, cited in the lede by...

why any would deserve a maintenance template (they may have deserved {{copyedit}} tags, but I believe I took care of those myself). I don't find the hook...

section. Gnangarra 05:34, 26 July 2019 (UTC) I have given the article a copyedit to address the concerns of a few sentences that can be reworded Gnangarra...

to promote this, but first read the whole thing through and gave it a copyedit for English grammar. I think the hook reads like a snake that's turning...

"The most known..." and "There should be more coming soon". A general copyedit is needed too. Moswento talky 21:43, 22 November 2012 (UTC) I deleted the...

Gbawden (talk). Self-nominated at 08:55, 19 April 2020 (UTC). Did a quick copyedit of the hooks since there were no links to the relevant articles, but will...

person at first and was a tad confused. Would you be fine with a slight copyedit to change the ending of the hook to "the city of Akashi left"? ~ RobTalk...

looking at the article, I think it is not ready for DYK. The text needs a copyedit—the opening sentence of the article is a fragment, which is a bad sign...

they sound more natural. I'd appreciate it if someone could see if the "copyedit needed" template could be removed. KimYubin (talk) 14:45, 14 May 2026 (UTC)...

schooling. Mangoe (talk) 11:22, 8 April 2016 (UTC) @Mangoe: Thanks for the copyedit - looks a lot better. The title is a bit difficult, but as far as I can...

is sufficient to be considered a new fact rather than just a rewording/copyedit, so I won't approve the hook I proposed just to play it safe. ~ RobTalk...

Reviewed: Stratford General Strike of 1933 Comment: Happy about hook / copyedit suggestions. Lots of free images exist, but no particularly exciting ones...

c) 18:50, 26 September 2019 (UTC) Thanks for review. I have requested copyedit at GOCE so someone will help. Meanwhile I will do QPQ and add ALT hook...

are poorly written and at the very least would need a copyedit, the article also needs a copyedit and strikes me as having POV issues. Also, I am uncomfortable...

and verified), but for now I would suggest that the article be given a copyedit as there some typographical errors and missing "the" words. Also, in the...

a rename work? The article has excellent content, but needs a through copyedit if not a rewrite. The language is more suited to an academic paper than...

new enough, long enough, no copyvios, hook is amusing but needs a bit of copyedit. Suggest: ALT1 ... that Mughal emperor Humayun died by falling down from...

subsequent Treaty of Berlin restored it to the Ottoman Empire? Thanks for copyedit. Alt hook is fine with me.--Antidiskriminator (talk) 13:37, 8 June 2013...

Indonesian source, no close paraphrasing there. Redyka, you could use a copyedit however. Crisco 1492 (talk) 09:15, 6 May 2012 (UTC) If Crisco is not concerned...

now? -- Esemono (talk) 02:47, 23 May 2012 (UTC) Looks acceptable now (I've done a fairly large copyedit)  — Crisco 1492 (talk) 07:14, 23 May 2012 (UTC)...

This is the template sandbox page for Template:Copyedit progress (diff)....

in the National Football League. It's very unusual. I've done a slight copyedit in the article. ~ RobTalk 05:20, 20 May 2016 (UTC) @BU Rob13: Cool! I'm...

interesting and factual, and I like the topic, but the article needs copyedits for grammar before it is ready for DYK. Please give it a good read. I'll...

not refer to the basement as "small", and 3. the article is in need of a copyedit for some minor grammatical errors. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions)...

Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:01, 12 January 2017 (UTC) As noted earlier, the GOCE copyedit left the article with 952 prose characters, which is indeed far too short...

article about a woman and bringing it to DYK! I've given the article a light copyedit and note that the attribution is given in history. I corrected a typo in...

enjoyed the cartoons of the pets' door. I have given the article a minor copyedit (mostly unnecessary repetitions of subject's name), which does not affect...

with out the img. Thanks.--Nvvchar. 02:03, 22 March 2013 (UTC) for Alt 1, made minor copyedit to hook. The Interior (Talk) 04:41, 22 March 2013 (UTC)...

Ashwin147 (talk) 05:46, 13 August 2020 (UTC) Hello, I'm working on another DYK copyedit request, but this one is next in my queue. One that is done, I will get...

title of article should be changed to better title and the article must be copyedit.Saff V. (talk) 11:23, 26 December 2015 (UTC) @Saff V.: Thanks for your...

article. The first is that it needs a thorough copyedit, and should not run until that is done. If the copyedit is done by someone who can look for POV issues...

fascinating article. I enjoyed reading that. I have given the article a minor copyedit for clarity of English (no content changed). That does not affect DYK....

No copyvio, interesting and well-referenced article, might need slight copyedit but nothing serious. Hook cited in article. Good to go with ALT2. Kingsif...

and suggestions. - Vivvt • (Talk) 21:39, 14 January 2013 (UTC) Needs a copyedit. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 14:54, 15 January 2013 (UTC) For article or the hook...

February 2012 (UTC) This now ticks all the boxes. I can't see any more copyedit/paraphrase issues, and the article is well-cited, including the hook. This...

"red" since that seems to be what's in the text, link the colony. Also a copyedit to, among other reasons, ensure the new version isn't any longer than the...